Brody was nervous. He had never done this before. He was standing in front of her door. Nicole said it would be unlocked. He opened it and walked in. Closing the door quietly behind him. He walked silently through her house. He could hear her cooking in the kitchen. He walked up behind her without making a sound and wrapped his hand around her mouth keeping her looking forward and whispers in her ear "shhhh don't say a word". He grabs a towel from the stove and wraps it around her mouth. Then he grabs one and puts it over her eyes. He grabs the rope from a apron and ties her hands behind her back. He pulls down her booty shorts and rips her panties right off. She hears him spit and she whimpers, not knowing what to expect. The next thing she feels is her asshole being stretched out by something huge and hard and she whimpers louder. Brody smacks her ass leaving his whole hand print on her ass. " I told you to be quiet" and he thrusts 8 inches of rock hard cock into her ass. He holds it deep in her without moving to test her being quiet. She trembles but she doesn't know if it's from fear or pleasure. her ass feels so full she twitches every time she feels his cock pulse deep inside her. He slowly starts moving his hips around swirling his cock deep inside her. After a couple minutes he feels a warm liquid running down his balls. He holds Nicole down and pulls out to inspect. He bends over and sees Nicoles pussy is soaking wet and dripping with juices. He even notices a small puddle of juices on the floor below her and he can see she is getting excited by this. He picks up her ripped panties and wipes her pussy clean. He takes off the towel from Nicoles mouth and shoves her wet thong into her mouth then ties the towel back up leaving her gagged. He grabbed a wooden spoon and starting spanking Nicole with it. Every time Nicole whimpered Brody would smack her ass harder. After her ass was beat red he turned her around and pulled her mouth towel down and her panties out. He proceeded to stick his cock into her mouth. He feels some teeth and pulls out. "Was that teeth I felt?" She doesn't answer. He slaps her face with his cock. " did you try to bite me?" He slaps her face with his cock again. She shakes her head no. " Good. Now be a good slut and open up wide. He grabs the back of her head and ferociously starts fucking her face. His cock drilling the back of her throat,making Nicole gag and making her mouth water even more until she gags so hard he needs to pull out. Nicole chokes and tries to grasp for air as Brody pulls his cock out of her throat. He unties Nicoles hands and picks her up and lies her on her back on the table. He ties her hands to each side of the table. He pulls her to the edge and pulls her legs over his shoulders. With one last pull towards him Nicole feels his cock just slide smoothly into her soaking wet pussy. He is slowly going in but Nicole wants it so bad now she pushes herself down so hard her ass falls off the table and she is hanging off the table on nothing but his cock. He grabs under and squeezes each ass cheek and starts grinding into her pussy in and out getting faster and faster. Squeezing her ass harder she can feel the soreness from the spanking he had given her not even an hour ago but she embraces the burn and beings enjoying the pain. Before she knows it her head Is bouncing off the table as her pussy gets pounded harder then she ever thought she could handle. She feels tons of warm water spraying all over her and realizes her pussy is squirting everywhere. With every hard thrust of his cock her juices would spray up and cover her whole body. She was now sliding up and down the slippery table as Brody is controlling her pussy onto his cock balls deep then out all the way to the head and back in balls deep over and over again until he squeezes her ass so hard she can't help but screaming out in pleasure, as she cums the hardest cum of her life and she feels her whole pussy fill Instantly with his very warm cum. He kisses her and pulls her towel off of her eyes "I love you baby". His cock is still pulsing inside her and her pussy starts overflowing warm cum covering her asshole as it drips up her back with her legs still over his shoulder.I love you too Brody. They smile at each other. Nicole says See baby I told you it would be fun. I've never felt your cock so hard and you've never filled me that much before " yes it was amazing Nicole. You always have the kinkiest ideas that's why I love you so much.". He pulls his cock out and kneels down on the floor. "Keep your legs up" he tells her. He imminently dives into her pussy tongue first as it started to ooze cream pie. As Nicole felt her lovers tongue cleaning her pussy she couldn't help but orgasm again, pushing out all of his cum and draining her pussy. She lied back, still tied and enjoyed the rest of her cleaning for another few minutes before Brody appeared again and gave her a wet kiss and untied her.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/2uw3oq/first_attempt_at_a_erotic_short_story_lemme_know
Sounds like a lot of fun. I have no clue what people like best about eroticliterature, I’m very new to it. If I had to guess though, I’d say it’s how it has sort of a slow burn to the good stuff, how the reader has to sort of imagine herself or himself slowly getting into the people in the story and imagining themseves taking the role. Somebody can absolutely correct me on that, but seems like there’s a billion porn videos someone could watch if they just want to jump right into hot action immediately. Literature paints a picture a little more patiently. Maybe add a little more intro to sort of get people worked up a little before Brody starts giving it to her? I’ve only written two of these and I probably had way too much time before the "action" but I think a little more "story foreplay" might be get readers in the mood a little more. Again, I could be totally wrong. Seems like a lot of people read these stories but not a lot comment on them, so I just thought I’d say what I thought.
Oh my god, the formatting. Hit enter twice to split up a paragraph. It makes it so that it isn’t just one big huge wall of text.
Yeah it was just typed up on my phone. Just wanted to see if it was worth the time to write another one with edits next time.