My idea for the scenario was to be set in Ancient Greece. The female character is a member of the mythical all-women Amazon tribe who gets selected to kidnap and mate with a young man from a nearby village. Basically she kidnaps him and has her way with him. So far I have just started working on one of the sex scenes. I've never really written anything before so I'm not sure if my writing is any good. Below is what I have so far:
Within the tent, Alexius lay face up on a bed of soft-furred animal skins, a small blanket draped across his lap. Four lengths of rope tied around his wrists and ankles secured his limbs to the thick wooden spikes of the tent. Helene shed her clothing and stood over him, feeling the warm summer air against her naked skin as she contemplated where to begin.
She straddled his chest and gently lowered herself until she was resting upon him. She could feel the rise and fall of his chest pressing into her groin as he breathed, his hot breath tickling her inner thighs. She gazed straight down into his deep brown eyes and rifled her fingers through his thick black curls of hair.
“Tonight, you belong to me,” thought Helene. The nub of her clitoris began to swell in anticipation.
Alexius had not yet lain with a woman, but he intended to do as she pleased. The restraints were loose enough for him to shift slightly, but it was clear that she was in control.
Slowly, she started lifting Alexius’ head and he obeyed. He turned his face to one side, his lips grazing the crook of her thigh with a gentle kiss, and then another, and another… She shifted forward slightly and hovered her groin above his mouth and chin.
Soon, he reached the hood of her clitoris and imparted the gentlest kiss of all, his lips parting slightly and the tip of his tongue slithered out. A subtle tap of pressure on the head of her clitoris was enough to send a jolt through her body causing her hips to shudder.
His head pulled back slightly as he felt her shiver. Helene had to stop herself from crying out for more, but not before a small moan escaped her mouth.
He moved in for another flick, slightly slower and stronger this time. She was ready for it, sighing softly.
Alexius circled back and prodded farther down. She felt the warmth and moisture of his tongue mingling with her own wetness as it stroked past and traced a small circle around her clitoris.
This sweet torture was more than Helene could bear. She tightened her grip on his head and slowly maneuvered his face closer in. Alexius submitted, his mouth hanging agape with his tongue trailing out.
Alexius savored the sweet juices that trickled out from between his beautiful goddess’s legs. He felt the swollen nub and soft folds of pink flesh being massaged by the surface of his tongue as she rocked back and forth on his face. The tip of his tongue meanwhile gently drew circles around the rim of her vaginal opening
An intense sensation suddenly began to radiate from her clitoris, traveling deep inside her. Helene relaxed, allowing the pleasure to wash over her in stronger waves with each stroke of his tongue. Soon she climaxed, her vagina clenching in spasms.
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/2qz94v/start_of_my_new_short_erotic_fiction_story_first
Some women might be put off by reading the word "vagina" in their erotica. It’s the correct word and perhaps too clinical? On the other hand, some women don’t like other words and find it offensive. Also, if you are going to publish it- make sure you thoroughly research what is and isn’t allowed (dubious consent vs non consent).
I for one would prefer the word vagina or vulva instead of love cave or womanhood. Vagina is a great word, it’s voluptuous and sensual. Euphemisms usually leave me a bit cold.
I vote "Vagina". I also vote for diversification in use of the clitoral ‘nub’, and I thought a bit of foreplay would have been nice before the first shudder. You’d think that if they were mating, she’d get some sexy insemination action going on as well — maybe that happens later in the story.