Damn that’s hot *written by a woman and most likely for women

I hear the hard, “Knock Knock Knock” of the door. My heart jumps and I smooth the wrinkles from my tight mini dress as I open the door. There he is: standing there, so beautiful and tall, skin was tanned from his long journey and his golden hair softly on his shoulders. He tilts his head downward to look at me, and smiles. I let him in and close the door. He wraps his arms around me and I feel so much tension between our hearts.

Slowly his hands go from the top of my back, down my waist. He stops and holds me art arms length. “Kat, I have missed you so much” and before I could reply his lips are on mine and we are a whirlwind of butterflies. My body ached without him and now it was like pouring honey on a sore throat.

I motioned for the door so we could begin our date but he had other intentions. He stood, broad chested and gorgeous in the way of the door and motioned for the bed. I looked doey eyed at him and played his little game. I sat on the edge of the bed and gave him a smirk. All the while my heart is playing jump rope and I feel like the fizz of champagne.

He is so tall! My bed is lower to the ground so he slinks like a lion attacking prey and places his muscular arms straight and firmly around my sides like a cage. I look up at him again, feigning innocence but my breath is so far gone that I can’t say anything. He makes me forget to exhale almost constantly. He lowers his torso close to mine and I feel his long hair on my bare shoulders. His eyes are looking deeply into mine and I can hardly move but I am noticing how wet I am getting.

He lowers himself further and I have no choice but to lower myself or collide with his body. I am not prepared to feel the electric of his body so I lay back, not realizing that I am exactly where he wants me. He lets off, just long enough to remove his shirt, revealing his muscular chest and tanned skin. Something about his long hair and masculine body fills my pussy with erotic static and my mind shoots off like fireworks. I open my legs and he lowers himself down between my knees. He slips off my thong and looks up at me, “I love you Kat” and begins licking my pussy longingly. By this time my head is reeling and body is shivering with immense pleasure. His strong, rough hands are pushing apart my thighs which are trying to close because my body can’t deal with the pleasure. He is knowingly forcing me to deal with the pleasure of his hot tongue and dripping saliva all over my pussy. He slips his tongue in and I moan. I can’t believe this is happening. He looks up at me and smiles, mouth covered in dew. I rub my breasts and body and exhale sharply as he inserts a finger.

He motions with his finger in and out of my pussy with a delicate trance as he continuously licks me. He inserts another finger and all I want now is his penis. He knows he is teasing me, that he can give me so much more pleasure with his penis than his hands. I sit up and get him to kiss me hard. He sits between my legs, shirtless, and we’re tongues in each other’s throats kissing. I manage to undo his pants and feel his hard penis. OMG I am dripping at this point, I cannot wait to feel him inside of me. My pussy feels like it’s on fire and only he can put it out.

He puts his large fingers back in my pussy with one hand and lifts up my dress with the other. I help him and pull the entire thing off- now sitting in a black bra and he’s there with opened jeans and boxer briefs. I unlatch the bra but he’s so busy fingering me and kissing me that he barely notices. He grabs my hair and pulls me closer to him, and crawls onto the bed with me as he removes his pants. He turns me over so that I am face down, flat, and climbs directly on top of me. He pulls my hair again and I feel his erection in his boxer briefs. He kisses the back of my neck and sucks, elating me. His penis is hard and fitting in between my luscious buttocks. He swerves into me and I feel it rub in between my cheeks. His hair tickles my back and breath is hot on my neck. He eases up and removes his shorts, giving me a chance to roll over and stare at him a moment.

He is on his knees above me but I sit up and push him playfully onto the bed. I grab his large, thick penis in my hand. My hand can’t wrap around the entire thing but I stare at it like a popsicle. He knows exactly what I want to do, and I can tell from the pre-cum that he is so excited. I lick the side of his shaft while holding the base of his penis. I reach the tip and the pre-cum extends from his penis to my lips as I slowly pull away. The sight of this drives him crazy and he immediately tries to touch me, but I put his entire penis in my mouth and down my throat and he lays down again, in agonizing pleasure. His sigh is a sigh of a thousand angels and I am working my lips slowly up and down his shaft. I start fingering myself and I ready for the ecstasy that is his penis. He senses the tension and sits up right, and pushes me hard back onto the bed.

He can’t control himself at this point and jumps on top of my naked body and into my pussy with his huge penis. He begins working his hips and moaning. I’m moaning too and can hardly believe it’s real. The pleasure is amazing and I feel him so deep inside of my pussy now. He stops a moment, so far inside, and swerves his hips in a circular pattern. I can feel every inch of him and he feels every inch of me. He stretches my pussy with a painful pleasure and I can’t believe he can fit the whole thing inside of me.

He looks into my eyes and says, “I’m going to make you come now” and I can’t exhale again but he begins really pleasuring himself with my body and the sight of his face in ecstasy makes me cum. I feel the shivers and grab his shoulders tightly. “OHHHHH MYYY GOOODDD” I whisper as he brings me to climax. He turns me over again and kisses my back. He props my legs up and begins kissing my pussy in doggy style. I feel him push himself inside of me again. His huge penis fills every inch of me and he eases into humping me, holding my waist and bending forward so I can feel his sweat and hair drip and caress my bare back. He starts going faster and I catch a glimpse of this in the mirror. He looks so sexy back there, so masculine and animalistic. I feel so free and wild and he notices me staring. He stares into my eyes through the mirror and leans forward, not taking his eyes off of mine, and says, “I’m going to make you cum again, my queen”. This alone brings me closer to climax and he slaps my ass and begins humping me HARD. I look in the mirror and watch him. I’m on all fours but he is on one knee, the other leg propped up like he is proposing to me and he’s really going at it, staring at my ass and watching his huge member glide in and out of my dripping wet pussy. I cum again and he grabs the back of my neck. He rolls me over and gets on top of me again. “God you are gorgeous” he mutters and I can tell he is close to climax. I wrap my legs around his torso and kiss him hard. We begin a slow dance of sensual tongue tango and I feel his body begin to get rigid. He grits his teeth and tells me, “I’m going to cum”. I look into his eyes and he stares into mine. He begins to hump me faster and I cum from the excitement. My wet pussy gets wetter and he cums as well. He moans a deep, disgruntled moan and looks into my eyes. His hair is touching my cheek and his sweat glistens on his gorgeous skin. He cracks a smile and says, “Hi Kat, It is so good to see you”. He lays down on his back and I roll onto my side, my head and arm on his chest. This is exactly where I want to be.

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/2abaxm/damn_thats_hot_written_by_a_woman_and_most_likely

3 comments

  1. this is my first time writing something like this…any suggestions are helpful

  2. I know this is a bit late, but i just read this and it’s good for a beginner. I would take out the random "OMG" in the middle as it is a mood breaker.

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