The Animal Within – Part 1 (Critiques Welcome)[Str8][MF][BDSM]

Weeks. It had been building for weeks. Every day the touches seemed a little less casual. The looks a little more suggestive. Today it was definitely there though. That thing between them. It was clear that today was different.

At first, she thought she was imagining things. He was always so controlled. So disciplined. So fucking platonic. She had worked with him for almost a year, and had barely gotten past platitudes and the occasional anecdote. He was attractive enough, in a very clean-cut way. Not especially tall or remarkable, but witty and occasionally she would get a glimpse at a dark humor just below the surface. His eyes would occasional betray a subtle disdain for the more ridiculous coworkers, or a world-weary amusement at the banal HR emails. It was enough to keep her interested.

After watching closely for months, she finally detected the slightest crack in his reserve. She had always ridden horses. From some of the things he said, he had a passing familiarity with cowboy riding, and tack, but she never got details nor had he expressed anything more than a polite interest. Until the day he saw the dressage crop in her car.

Sandstorm [MF, oral, fantasy]

(First attempt at writing fiction, feedback welcome!)


18°15’ North, 53°39’ East, Dhofar, Oman March 2nd, 1992, 2:18pm local time.

The world had disappeared beneath a curtain of wind blown sand and premature night. The wind roared like a beast while it clawed brutally at his clothes and the scarf wrapped around is mouth and nose. Thankful for his goggles, Nick could still see no further than a few yards.

The sand storm had rolled in from the north, gathering strength as it crossed the border from Saudi Arabia. It descended on them with surprising speed, giving them only half an hour to secure the dig sight and all of the equipment before the first sands began to swirl. Having weathered two smaller storms in as many weeks, the team had reacted well. Now, everyone was sealed in their tents taking advantage of the unscheduled rest.

Dirty wife contacts stranger MMF Fsub

Hi, it's your nasty whore here. My master fucked me so hard last night, made me so wet by getting me 2 dress up like a slut & paraded me around on my leash, do u wanna c me crawlin on the floor beggin 4 cock? I love suckin cock like a dirty bitch, u've never been deep throated like I can do it, my masters cock fits all the way & u've seen how big that is so I'll b able to take every last bit of ur tasty hard 8 inches. Thanks for ur dick pic, can I get a face one? Just wanna put a face to the cock. I wanna hear wat u want 2 do 2 me, how u want me 2 act & wat 2 wear, don't spare any explicit details, I like to b told wat to do, & punished if I don't obey. Let me know wat pics u want 2 see & I'll do them especially for u. right now, under my clothes I don't have any panties on but I do have a fishnet dirty girl top and tights. No one knows but me and u and that me so wet. Do u want to c me fuck myself? I love to perform & watch a cock go from soft 2 hard just by watchin me. Every time I see that u have looked @ my pictures my pussy starts dripping, it turns me on 2 think about u lookin @ my pics & gettin hard, do u like the ones of me tied up? Do u want to hold me down, tie me up and have ur way, my master is gonna let u do whatever u want 2 me so start thinking about how ur gonna use me. Please reply, I'm feeling so nasty, wish u lived close by so we could fuk 2day. I think my master is going 2 tie me up and fist me later, do u like that? If u think his cock is big, u should c his fist!! You'd never believe that I can take it, but I can, did u want to c? After we have fucked and cum @ our house I want to go for a drive. I'll sit in the back with my tits out and my pussy on display. U can get in the back with me I can b ur nasty whore, there to please and obey u. We could find a quiet spot, pull over and u & my master can empty ur hot cum all ova my tits so I can lick it off, every drop. We've got a sex shop near us, maybe we could go there and pick up a few things. I'd feel like such a dirty, nasty whore to go there with both u & my master. I'm sure whoever saw us in there would know wat a slut I was, being there with 2 guys. Especially when they see u both feeling me up and showing off my wet pussy. Would u like to c me go over to a stranger and lift up my skirt to present my dripping wet, nasty hole & beg him feel me up, knowing that he is gonna home and wank so hard over me. Maybe u could make me get on my knees and crawl over 2 him. Before we go out I want some beads put inside me so I can bend over and push them out for the stranger to see. I'd pull them out and lick them clean, do u think he would wanna taste? While u aand my master pay for everything, maybe I'll disapper, u'll find me round the back of the building on my knees deep throating his cock and taking another load of hot cum. U let him finish, but I'm in big trouble, I get pulled away by my hair and thrown in the car. I'm going to be punished when we get home, what will it be…

The Sun, The Girl and Goodbye, Ch5 [MF][Spanking]

He opens the door.

The tell-tale sizzle of a cast iron skillet sings from the kitchen. Our hero, tired like he's hung over, looks in confusion in the direction of the noise, down the hallway. The entire episode seems like a dream until he touches his face and winces, his cheek still tender from her slap. Then the memory of it all seeps in, last night, the strange country, the unmitigated tyranny of the sun.

Then other memories come to the surface. Bribery and trespassing most notably. Maybe breaking and entering if someone wanted to pin that on him. It certainly wouldn't be difficult.

He heads to the bathroom, looks at himself in the mirror and observes the bags under his eyes, the stubble he had no way of removing. So he turns on the hot water, runs a small rag under it and lays it over his face, dabbing at his eyes while breathing in the steam.

After he takes it off, he looks to the medicine cabinet. It is open, just slightly, and he considers exploring. Then he remembers that this is her sanctum. He's not even been invited. Our hero tosses around various justifications before closing it all the way shut.

A post-cum vignette [MF]

There's absolutely nothing in this world sweeter than your whole body forcing the cum out of your balls and into the deepest recesses of a woman's pussy. Pussy was designed for that shit.

Well, not what happened this time. She was a proper cumslut. Wanted my cum all over her glorious tits. Lady wants something, who am I to argue? I comply. We both find it feels equal parts kinky, novel, and exciting, the power games. The direction and ordering around. Except that I'm the one doing the ordering. I guess I'm just a benevolent dictator like that. Painting her with my cum does make for a very nice image in my head.

But it was sexy watching her slide her hand up and down the length of my cock, covered in her pussy nectar from earlier. She squeezed my balls while she worked my cock, but what pushed me over the edge was the look in her eyes. The beatific desire to please me. To be directed and controlled. Here, in this context only.

I came all over her breasts. Two powerful spurts, one on each breast. The rest dripping down my cock and onto her fingers. I know she felt my muscles pulsing like they only do when I cum.

A Couple’s Transgressions (MFf)

From a booth in the corner of the bar, Ashley and I sat swirling our straws in our drinks and surveying the crowd. So far, a group of overly boisterous young punks had taken over the pool table and a few quieter groups stood around drinking and laughing. Even though it was Spring Break and the building was pretty full, it was early enough that no one had yet broken a glass or humped a bar stool.

Ashley suddenly was quiet. I looked over and followed her gaze to the door. A petite redhead walked in with black strappy pumps and tight jeans over a nicely rounded backside. She tossed her curls over her shoulder and I watched her ass sway while she walked to the bar to order a drink.

Ashley said, “I think she’s alone. She might just be waiting for some friends, though. I think we should go talk to her.”

I shook my head and said, “No, no ‘we.’ I think you should go talk to her and see if she is comfortable meeting you.”

Molly, Jacob, and Camden – Summertime Blues 3 [FF][oral]

Click on my username to see the previous story posts featuring these three. This is the last part of this story.


Molly split her time during the week between work and fixing up their new apartment. Jacob had avoided her after she'd pressed him about Camden. She knew he worked out at his gym or went to extra practices for the school soccer team tryouts coming up in a couple of weeks. Even though he had a scholarship for soccer, he was still expected to compete for his position.

Zoe mentioned seeing Jacob around the sorority house with Anna in the evenings. If he came home after she went to sleep, he was gone again before she woke up. It was almost like living alone in the apartment and left Molly far too much time with her thoughts.

Tuesday night, after she got off working a double shift at the restaurant, Molly fumbled the key into the lock and pushed through the door to their apartment. The quiet and darkness were welcome after her busy day waiting tables. After showering off the stink of food and grease, she put on sweats, grabbed one of the few ciders left in the fridge, and curled up on the love seat with her phone.

Legacy (trilby else) an alternative ending [ff][fDom]

A lot of this document is copied directly from a story that was linked to recently. My edits start at "As she felt". I think this got caught by the spam filter for linking to other content so I'm leaving that out for now and the link to the original will be in the comments.

Also please keep in mind this is my first story of this kind here or anywhere. I wrote it just to get over the ending of the original.

Hypnotizing her first girl had left Robin excited and guilty. Drawing first-turn, her willowy Asian opponent tried fascinating her with strobelights and staccato commands.

Christine had conditioned Robin to resist those before she’d learned to drive.

The girl hadn’t expected to lose, which undermined whatever resistance she’d tried to marshal against Robin’s subsonics.

As Shane led her away, Robin silently promised: I’ll be good to you.

She’d also thought My pretty pony—and more fun to ride and scolded herself.

Now she was back, seeing antiques and electronics gleaming under the pavilion’s track-halogens. Unseen webcams and microphones would give the judges every detail.

A girl-shape left the opposite shadows.

Relieving the pressure of finals Part 1 [MF] [fantasy]

Marvel would never make a movie about it, but damn if it isn't exciting in its own way. See—I'm one of the first X-Men. A real one, I mean. And my ability doesn't heal me or make me fly or give me explosive eyesight, but it's one I don't think any red-blooded guy or gal would pass up if given the chance: a mastery over the sexual arousal of others.

It started when I hit puberty, and it made the perpetual boner of my teen years that much worse. It didn't take that much concentration as a high school sophomore—just a little thought to a dimple-cheeked, blossoming classmate of mine—to plant her seed of arousal, build on it, inflame it, and before long be enjoying her flushed face out of the corner of my vision, her sharp breaths, the two of us alone knowing that her horniness was building to a fever-pitch, her nipples hardening, her panties and skirt soaking through…

And the teachers—fuck, that was almost hotter. Getting gorgeous Algebra teacher Mrs. Willets so aroused and flustered that she'd forget what she was saying mid-sentence, letting it burn slow for the entire period, getting her in fucking heat the entire lecture with no release, and being the only one who knew what was happening… I'm surprised I didn't tear a hole through my jeans.

[F]licking it [F]or him [Oral]

I can feel the ropes tightening around my wrists as I move my hands to get the blood flowing back; they have been numb for…I really can’t say how long. I don’t know how long I have been here. My ankles are tied too but not as painful. As the blood travels back in my extremities, pain resumes. I shouldn’t have done that. Numb was better. He warned me it would happen if I fought the restraints too much.