On The Job [MF][Public][Oral][Creampie]

A little something I did as a special request from a fellow Redditor. Any and all feedback welcomed, and thanks in advance for reading!


With two more hours to go on his shift, Joseph got up from his seat by the monitor screens to stretch. The other three overnight guards had taken their turns doing a patrol around the complex, and now it was his. He fixed the way his belt sat around his waist, checked the monitors one last time, and stepped outside, locking the door behind him. He scratched at the straps of facial hair that went down to his goatee before sitting down in the golf cart parked outside. Joseph turned it on, flicked on the headlights, and fixed the mirrors. “One last patrol tonight,” he said to himself. “Let’s go.”

The apartment complex he worked at overnight was typically quiet. It was in one of the better parts of town, and as such had a rather expensive and reliable security system. Aside from cameras there were high rod iron fences with elaborate top decorations and self locking gates. He was one of five overnight guards, one stationed in each of the offices at the four corners of the complex, and the supervisor in the main office at the center.

What Happens in the Locker Room [mffff][Str8][Bi][Group][Oral][Mast][Fdom]

Coach Klein blew the whistle, signaling the end of practice for the day. Ryan finished his lap in the pool and pulled himself out, glancing around the indoor pool complex. He noticed the rest of his team gathering over in the far corner of the pool, and jointed them.

“Okay guys, good practice today,” Coach Klein said. “Now I don’t have to tell you all about how important tomorrow’s meet against McLane High is, you already know that. So get a good night’s rest, make sure you eat a healthy dinner, and pack some healthy snacks for the bus ride there and back. The bus will get here around 9am, it’s a two hour ride, and the meet starts at 1pm. Everybody clear on that?”

“Yes coach,” the team replied in unison.

Coach Klein nodded. “Okay then, you’re dismissed! See you tomorrow, guys.”

As the team got up and made their way over to the men’s locker room at the far end of the complex, Ryan made his way to the coach, taking off his swim cap and shaking the water out of his short brown hair. “Hey, coach, you got a sec?”

A Visit Home – [MF]

So this was originally a response I wrote for a post in /r/DirtyWritingPrompts, and I also posted it to literotica, but I thought I'd see what you guys thought to get some more direct feedback. Let me know what you think of the writing, dialogue, characters, and whatnot. I'd really love to improve my work, so thanks in advance. Hope you enjoy!


The engine of his brother’s old 1970 Chevelle cut off as Raymond removed the keys from the ignition. The silence took him by surprise, as it always did when he’d ride in it with Danny when they were younger. He got out of the car, taking note of the stares he got from passers-by in the parking lot as he shut and locked the door. No doubt they were curious as to why this stranger was in Danny Moreno’s car, and who he was.

The looks were put on the backburner as Raymond turned and walked into Terri’s Grocery. He hadn’t been in there in 14 years, not since the day he’d left for college. It was strange, being back home after so long, but here he was, going back into the store that belong to his old school bully’s family. Raymond laughed as he wondered what had happened to Derrick Terri, whether he was still the jock prick he was back then, or if he’d finally grown up and became a decent person.

A Parting Gift [Straight][MF]

Originally posted this last week as a response to a post on /r/DirtyWritingPrompts and have since posted it to an erotic fiction site, but I thought I should post it here to get some critiques and advice on how to better my writing as its been years since I've written anything. Please let me know what you think!


The day grew hot as Felix sat down at his desk to take a break from packing for his summer trip to Greece. He had gotten a job as a research assistant over the summer, and his flight was leaving in two days. He should have had it done earlier, but procrastination was always his strong suit, along with gaming and looking up random historical facts on the internet. Although now, as he opened up his laptop, history was the furthest thing from his mind.

Instead, he clicked the folder titled 'Frontline Tactics 2', and then opened the 'Sound Files' folder. Though instead of sound files, he found his stash of torrented porn. A few years earlier, his younger sister had accidentally found his downloaded porn, which he hadn't taken any precautions to hide, and got him grounded for six months. After that he had decided to keep it well hidden, and made sure to keep it behind fake folders. Even though he was 19, he still would prefer to not get in trouble over it.