My first foray into erotic writing: A simple story about getting deepthroated

*Hi everyone, I wrote this at the request of somebody I met at dirtykikpals. He really loves it so far, but I’d love to hear what you experienced erotica readers think. Please give me criticism. It’s MF, from the M perspective*

A simple story about getting deepthroated:

(Part 1: initiation) She enters the room. You look up at her, arms behind your head, sitting in a chair with your legs spread wide. She smiles and so do you. She idles timidly, unsure of herself, so you cock one eyebrow and gesture downward with a tilt of your head. Now with permission, she approaches you, standing before you between your legs. She looks down to see that you’re wearing only underwear, tightly pulled against your skin, a massive bulge pressing hard against the fabric. Her heart flutters at the sight of it and she kneels before you, raising one hand to rest on your heavy package. She looks up at you with a smile on her face that makes your cock twitch with anticipation. You give her an approving nod.

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