> One of the first stories I wrote. Bit clunky but I think it’s OK, would love some feedback…
The bell rang out over the yard, and we all started to trek back into school after lunch. Damn, I hated biology lessons, and we had double biology all afternoon. Still, at least in biology I got to sit next to Lucy. Fuck, but Lucy was dangerously hot – cute little blonde with sapphire-blue eyes that could make you weak at the knees from the other side of the room. The way she wore her uniform was almost criminal – little pleated skirt that swirled out every time she turned, every time threatening to flash a little knicker, but never quite delivering. Tight little white shirt on top, which her pert young breasts were constantly straining against. Honestly, the girl was a danger to my heart – my blood pressure, especially in one part of me, went through the roof every time she walked into the room.
Walking into the room was just what she was doing. Strolling lightly over to me with her usual fuck-me grin on her face. If you looked up ‘cocktease’ in a dictionary, there’d be a picture of Lucy right there – probably biting her lower lip in that way she always did when she looked over at you.