First attempt at erotic writing, pointers welcome

As he began to slowly work his lips down her body, her mind began to drift. She knew she should enjoy the time but she became so self conscious; what did he really think about her body, he couldn’t surely enjoy this, oh god he was at her stomach, she hoped he approved of her underwear. When his lips brushed along the outside of her pants, he seemed to sense that she was nervous, not quite in the moment, so started to work his mouth up her thighs whilst his fingers gently traced across her skin.

Her breath started to slow whilst her heart beat increased, she began to relax and feel the anticipation, wanting him to truly start his work. Thrusting her hips into the air he took the signal and removed her underwear, the warmth of his face returning between her thighs as he placed a gentle kiss on her lips. Pulling her hips towards him with his hands, the force and passion of the kiss increased, she felt the warm moisture of his tongue makes its first taste at her wetness.

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