Author: Silver_W01fVirg0

Let’s say you’re writing a scene and person A is smothering person B with their ass.

Person B is still talking, but it’s muffled. For the sake of the scenario, let’s say they’re begging for more.

In the comments, please show me examples of what B’s dialogue could look like.

I appreciate any participation and suggestions/advice, thank you!

Currently working on a piece and I was wondering two things.

1. When describing actions (and minimal dialogue) between two characters, should actions be broken by separate paragraphs as well?

2. Should a third-person narrative style talk about someone’s genitalia as it’s own entity (“Cera moaned loudly as her cock spewed more cum from its tip like a fountain”) OR should it be possessive, “As she moaned loudly, Cera’s cock spewed more cum from her tip like a fountain”)

Thanks in advance!🥰