This is the first chapter of a book I’m working on. I would love for you all to evaluate it and provide me with some constructive criticism. What’s good? What’s bad? What’s your overall opinion of the piece? Any feedback is appreciated.
Thank you for taking the time to read my work. I hope you enjoy it.
It was nearing five o’clock and I could hear the rustle of my coworkers gathering their things, getting ready to leave for the day. I looked out the window and admired how beautiful of a day it was. After a few moments I returned focus to my computer and began to work again.
“Staying late again, Chloe?” asked my coworker. She had her bag slung over her shoulder and was clearly on her way out.