An Evening of Passion [MF] [Vanilla] [Oral] [Passionate] [First Person] [No Sex]

This is my first post to this subreddit and my first attempt at writing anything of this nature. I would greatly appreciate it if any of you fine people could offer advice on what I wrote in case I ever post here again.
(I apologize if the formatting is bad. I have no experience with text posts of this magnitude.)
I hope some of you enjoy this! =)

   

Snow floats gently through the night sky; the twin curves of our bodies aligning tightly for warmth. Contented smiles light up out faces in the rays of moonlight coming through my window. I bury my face in your hair and give your body a gentle squeeze. You grab the arm trapped under your neck and giggle, causing our smiles to grow even larger. My hand finds yours as we interlace our fingers, returning once again to our still bliss. The only motion is the touch of my free hand on the small sliver of exposed skin between your nightshirt and sweat pants.