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The sun was just breaking the horizon still throwing long shadows on the calm Saturday morning streets of Philadelphia. Chloe gazed out her bathroom window letting the warm water rain over her for an extra minute. She watched as a tall broad man jogged down the street in full sweat suit and beanie, his breath visible as he plodded along. Chloe sighed. She hated the cold. She closed her eyes and backed fully under the steaming water indulging in the heat. She ran her hands through her hair. Squeezing out the last bit of conditioner. In her warm bliss she hadn’t noticed James in the doorway. James paused to watch his girlfriend. He loved watching her. He loved watching her study. He loved watching her work on her laptop. He loved how she danced subtly as she cooked, how she hummed in the shower. He watched as she rinsed herself. The steam engulfing her tight wet body. He watched the water beading down her toned abdomen. She turned to shut the water off, putting her tight plump behind on display. James bit his lip and exhaled softly, “Oof.”
Chloe yelped and spun around.“James! You scared me.”, She laughed.
“I’m sorry, I’m sorry!” he apologized as he met her at the glass shower door. “You can leave it on I’m going to jump in.”
“Mmm mm mmm. Please do.” Chloe welcomed him playfully holding the door open.
“Hold on let me pee first.” James interrupted as he slipped off his tight black briefs.
“Awwe babe! You’re so well trained!” Chloe teased as he relieved himself into the toilet instead of the drain of the shower.
“I know I know, quite impressive isn’t it?” he volleyed.
“Very.” Chloe smirked eyeing James plump morning cock.
“Hey hey, this isn’t a free show!” He teased noticing her gaze. He playfully held out his other hand to in an unsuccessful attempt to shield her view.
“Boooo!” Chloe giggled, Still enjoying the site of him. James was tall and athletic. He had dark wavy hair, the kind that looked good even if he just woke up, not in a cute bead head way either. He had the permanent elegantly disheveled look. His eye brows were thick and stood pronounced on his defined brow.
“That’s going to cost you little missy!” He toyed with her as he strode to meet her in the shower.
“Oh no how ever will I pay you, sir.” Chloe played along in a shy tone looking up to him making her big brown eyes as wide and intriguing as possible as he entered the shower.
“Mmm I think we can come to an agreement.” James took her chin in his hand and bent down to kiss her pulling her warm wet body against his as their lips embraced.
“Mmm.” Chloe hummed softly as she wrapped her hands around his neck.
“Good morning baby.” James added softly between sucking her bottom lip. Chloe had full sensual lips. The kind most girls had to pay for.
“Good morning indeed.” She confirmed, tilting her head back as James explored her neck with his lips. His short scruff tickled and she loved it.
“When do they get in?” He asked as he slowly moved away to retrieve the shampoo bottle, letting his large hands slip off her slowly as he reached.
“11:30 I believe.” She answered as she regained consciousness, letting him step away and taking the moment to rinse the last bit of conditioner out.
“Nice. I still need to grab some booze and tidy up the patio. What do you think Jen drinks?” James questioned as he lathered his hair with both hands.
“Hmmm good question.” Chloe wondered as she indulged in the site of her tall muscled man once more. His long biceps bulged tightly as he ran his hands through his hair, his toned abdomen rippling sporadically. “How bout I go to the store instead so I can pick and you don’t have to do all the chores?” she recommended as she pumped body wash into her palm.
“No, I don’t mind babe. I thought you had patient charts to go over still?” He contested as he rinsed the foam from his scalp.
“I do but it wont take all morning.” She said as she began to lather his back.
“Mmm thank you.” He responded to her touch. “If you’re sure. I want you to be able to have your work done so you aren’t stressing this weekend and we can all have a good time.”
“I know baby thank you. I have things I need for my recipe still anyways. I can get my work out of the way first. It isn’t too much.” She looked up to him as he turned to face her. His eyes investigating her. Chloe kissed his chest as she started soaping his front. Her small hands running along the ripples of his obliques as he leaned over her resting his hands on the wall above her head.
“If you insist.” He conceded, looking down at her.
“I do.” She confirmed softly, meeting his gaze as she ran her hands down his pelvis and through his low cropped pubic hair. She held his gaze, taking him into both her hands. She stroked his thick member and massaged his heavy soapy balls.
“Oof, yes ma’am.” James obliged through a soft grunt.
“Good boy.” She praised, giving his growing cock a firm squeeze and biting her lip.
“Don’t tease me baby.” James begged playfully, still leaned over looking down on her.
“I’m not…” Chloe confirmed, grasping his nearly full cock with both hands. She began rhythmically stroking him, holding his gaze as he grew in her hands. James groaned softly as she worked him. “Mmmm good boy…” She encouraged him rubbing him with a twisting motion as she pumped his throbbing shaft. “You just work on the patio for me while I get my work done. I want to watch you sweat.” She demanded quietly making him lean further down to listen to her.
“Yes baby, yes.” He submitted through heavy breath.
“Mmm good boy.” She pulled him closer by his cock, now tugging harder and faster. His cock bulging in her tiny hands. James stood tall at 6’4” when he wasn’t hunched over his petite girlfriend and his cock fit him, well.
“Yes baby, yes. I–” He stuttered as he shifted his weight.
“Shhhh.” She silenced. “Cum for me.” She demanded, working his long thick cock from hilt to tip in slow strokes with both hands squeezing as she pulled to the tip making soap foam and drip from his bugling head.
“I—”
“Shhhh.” she demanded now stroking him faster still holding his wondering gaze as he released. “Yes, good man. Cum for me.” She praised him as he convulsed over her, his abs tightening, his breath heavy. She kept stroking him, pumping thick ropes of hot cum onto her torso. His heavy grunts only satisfied her more as she milked the last bit out of him.
“Fuck.” He finished as she eased her grasp on him now petting his empty member lovingly.
“Good man.” She smiled up at him, covered in his glaze.
“Ugh I need a nap.” He sighed appreciatively.
“No, no no mister” She teased giving him a swift spank as she slipped from under him to rinse herself once more, this time feeling much more accomplished. Her man toy remained leaning on the wall and she eyed his sculpted broad back. “You’ve got work to do.” She teased, looking forward to watching his muscles work from the window while he tidies the patio for their guests.
“Yes, yes love.” He turned providing a smile and leaning for a kiss.

Just some free writing

The sun was just breaking the horizon still throwing long shadows on the calm Saturday morning streets of Philadelphia. Chloe gazed out her bathroom window letting the warm water rain over her for an extra minute. She watched as a tall broad man jogged down the street in full sweat suit and beanie, his breath visible as he plodded along. Chloe sighed. She hated the cold. She closed her eyes and backed fully under the steaming water indulging in the heat. She ran her hands through her hair. Squeezing out the last bit of conditioner. In her warm bliss she hadn’t noticed James in the doorway. James paused to watch his girlfriend. He loved watching her. He loved watching her study. He loved watching her work on her laptop. He loved how she danced subtly as she cooked, how she hummed in the shower. He watched as she rinsed herself. The steam engulfing her tight wet body. He watched the water beading down her toned abdomen. She turned to shut the water off, putting her tight plump behind on display. James bit his lip and exhaled softly, “Oof.”
Chloe yelped and spun around.“James! You scared me.”, She laughed.
“I’m sorry, I’m sorry!” he apologized as he met her at the glass shower door. “You can leave it on I’m going to jump in.”
“Mmm mm mmm. Please do.” Chloe welcomed him playfully holding the door open.
“Hold on let me pee first.” James interrupted as he slipped off his tight black briefs.
“Awwe babe! You’re so well trained!” Chloe teased as he relieved himself into the toilet instead of the drain of the shower.
“I know I know, quite impressive isn’t it?” he volleyed.
“Very.” Chloe smirked eyeing James plump morning cock.
“Hey hey, this isn’t a free show!” He teased noticing her gaze. He playfully held out his other hand to in an unsuccessful attempt to shield her view.
“Boooo!” Chloe giggled, Still enjoying the site of him. James was tall and athletic. He had dark wavy hair, the kind that looked good even if he just woke up, not in a cute bead head way either. He had the permanent elegantly disheveled look. His eye brows were thick and stood pronounced on his defined brow.
“That’s going to cost you little missy!” He toyed with her as he strode to meet her in the shower.
“Oh no how ever will I pay you, sir.” Chloe played along in a shy tone looking up to him making her big brown eyes as wide and intriguing as possible as he entered the shower.
“Mmm I think we can come to an agreement.” James took her chin in his hand and bent down to kiss her pulling her warm wet body against his as their lips embraced.
“Mmm.” Chloe hummed softly as she wrapped her hands around his neck.
“Good morning baby.” James added softly between sucking her bottom lip. Chloe had full sensual lips. The kind most girls had to pay for.
“Good morning indeed.” She confirmed, tilting her head back as James explored her neck with his lips. His short scruff tickled and she loved it.
“When do they get in?” He asked as he slowly moved away to retrieve the shampoo bottle, letting his large hands slip off her slowly as he reached.
“11:30 I believe.” She answered as she regained consciousness, letting him step away and taking the moment to rinse the last bit of conditioner out.
“Nice. I still need to grab some booze and tidy up the patio. What do you think Jen drinks?” James questioned as he lathered his hair with both hands.
“Hmmm good question.” Chloe wondered as she indulged in the site of her tall muscled man once more. His long biceps bulged tightly as he ran his hands through his hair, his toned abdomen rippling sporadically. “How bout I go to the store instead so I can pick and you don’t have to do all the chores?” she recommended as she pumped body wash into her palm.
“No, I don’t mind babe. I thought you had patient charts to go over still?” He contested as he rinsed the foam from his scalp.
“I do but it wont take all morning.” She said as she began to lather his back.
“Mmm thank you.” He responded to her touch. “If you’re sure. I want you to be able to have your work done so you aren’t stressing this weekend and we can all have a good time.”
“I know baby thank you. I have things I need for my recipe still anyways. I can get my work out of the way first. It isn’t too much.” She looked up to him as he turned to face her. His eyes investigating her. Chloe kissed his chest as she started soaping his front. Her small hands running along the ripples of his obliques as he leaned over her resting his hands on the wall above her head.
“If you insist.” He conceded, looking down at her.
“I do.” She confirmed softly, meeting his gaze as she ran her hands down his pelvis and through his low cropped pubic hair. She held his gaze, taking him into both her hands. She stroked his thick member and massaged his heavy soapy balls.
“Oof, yes ma’am.” James obliged through a soft grunt.
“Good boy.” She praised, giving his growing cock a firm squeeze and biting her lip.
“Don’t tease me baby.” James begged playfully, still leaned over looking down on her.
“I’m not…” Chloe confirmed, grasping his nearly full cock with both hands. She began rhythmically stroking him, holding his gaze as he grew in her hands. James groaned softly as she worked him. “Mmmm good boy…” She encouraged him rubbing him with a twisting motion as she pumped his throbbing shaft. “You just work on the patio for me while I get my work done. I want to watch you sweat.” She demanded quietly making him lean further down to listen to her.
“Yes baby, yes.” He submitted through heavy breath.
“Mmm good boy.” She pulled him closer by his cock, now tugging harder and faster. His cock bulging in her tiny hands. James stood tall at 6’4” when he wasn’t hunched over his petite girlfriend and his cock fit him, well.
“Yes baby, yes. I–” He stuttered as he shifted his weight.
“Shhhh.” She silenced. “Cum for me.” She demanded, working his long thick cock from hilt to tip in slow strokes with both hands squeezing as she pulled to the tip making soap foam and drip from his bugling head.
“I—”
“Shhhh.” she demanded now stroking him faster still holding his wondering gaze as he released. “Yes, good man. Cum for me.” She praised him as he convulsed over her, his abs tightening, his breath heavy. She kept stroking him, pumping thick ropes of hot cum onto her torso. His heavy grunts only satisfied her more as she milked the last bit out of him.
“Fuck.” He finished as she eased her grasp on him now petting his empty member lovingly.
“Good man.” She smiled up at him, covered in his glaze.
“Ugh I need a nap.” He sighed appreciatively.
“No, no no mister” She teased giving him a swift spank as she slipped from under him to rinse herself once more, this time feeling much more accomplished. Her man toy remained leaning on the wall and she eyed his sculpted broad back. “You’ve got work to do.” She teased, looking forward to watching his muscles work from the window while he tidies the patio for their guests.
“Yes, yes love.” He turned providing a smile and leaning for a kiss.