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I had just gotten off work and was ready to have a couple shots of vodka at home. Traffic is backed up for miles and a taxi won't get me anywhere. I might as well take the subway. I make my way down the stairs to the abyss. The stench of death down below. I run up to get my ticket knowing I may miss my ride and half to wait again. wham "I'm so sorry" knocking my briefcase out of my hands, I reach down and look up. A small smile on your face. You turn and continue walking toward the gate. 'wow' I think to myself 'that is one sexy looking woman' I grab my ticket and make my way to the gate.