Not that kind of girl [MF] [Mdom] [Sub] – Part 2

Part 1 can be found [here](https://www.reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/e1nbf6/not_that_kind_of_girl_mf_mdom_sub/).

I would really appreciate any feedback, what was good, what wasn’t. Better or worse than part 1?

The feedback I received after part 1 means that I remembered to proof read for spelling/grammar, but apologies if there are still errors!

Edit: fixed some mistakes

**Not that kind of girl – Part 2**

The cab journey was a blur, he whispered dirty things in my ear the whole way, telling me exactly what he was going to do to me. What he was going to make me do. We arrived at his place and he immediately led me into the centre of his living room, stood in front of me, and ordered me to strip down to my underwear.

I can’t believe I was doing this. Was I going to do this? The voice in the back of my head started to list all the reasons this was a bad idea again. And I was about to start panicking when he stepped forward, grabbed my hips and pushed himself against me. His lips brushed my ear and he whispered “you know you can leave at any time, but we both know how much you want this. You’re still soaking wet from having my fingers in your pussy earlier, so stop overthinking this. Strip for me right now, and then get on your knees.”

Not that kind of girl [MF] [Mdom]

So it’s my first time writing anything like this and I would really appreciate some feedback! What worked, what didn’t? Should I continue the story?

**Not that kind of girl**

Nervously I glance down at my phone, and check the time again. It’s only been a minute since I last checked. Dammit. Right, I won’t check the time again until I’ve finished my wine. Or he arrives.

I take another sip of the wine, hoping that it will calm my nerves, but I can’t stop myself from scanning the bar again, looking at the door for the hundredth time. I pick up my phone to check for messages, there are none, and unconsciously open Reddit and check my messages there too. Cause of course that’s why I’m here. Why I’m sitting in bar dressed more provocatively than I have ever dressed in my life. My dress is a little too low cut for a women with breasts the size of mine. And definitely a little too short, even if I do have the legs for it. Usually I dress to cover up my figure, but not tonight, because tonight I’m dressed for him.