Slut for a night [Str8][M/F][oral][Fsub][creampie]

Hi everybody, This is my first attempt at erotica. I'd love any suggestions or comments. Thanks

On to the story —- He sat waiting for her to come home, planning and plotting a new experience for her tonight. Once she walked opened the door and stepped into the apartment he was on her, his mouth hot against hers. They stood in the doorway exchanging kisses getting hotter and hotter, their tongues darting in and out. He pulled her tight against him her sexy curves held tight against body. She gasped slightly at his intensity and her bags dropped to the floor, forgotten. One of his hands held the small of her back, holding her tightly to him. The other slowly cupped the tight roundness of her ass. His hand squeezed and caressed that taut roundness and slowly slipped down her leg. He lifted her leg and it coiled around him pulling him back into her. His hand gently pushed her skirt up higher and higher exposing the lacy top of her stockings, the straps of her garter belt and finally cupping the swell of her ass cheeks and slipping a finger under her thong to feel nothing between his hand and the warm flesh of her ass. Quickly and wordlessly the finger under the thong began to rub up and down the crack of slit. She moaned softly into his mouth as his finger began to brush her clit and then apply a light pressure to her opening in turn.