Yes, be happy you found this you pervert :) To be fair, though, it’s not very erotic, but just mostly a dark story. Thought it fitted well in here though, hehe. Read at your own risk!
[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rgThXQG_0tsaOJPOelnrEHk1CtBZxxSX7361KIg7yDY/edit](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rgThXQG_0tsaOJPOelnrEHk1CtBZxxSX7361KIg7yDY/edit)
I am looking for critique on the STORY and DIALOG, not syntax, grammar, spelling errors etc :) Thank you!