First Crack (pun intended) at Anal Erotica

This is Chapter 16 in an ongoing series I’ve published on literotica. Posting here for feedback and in an attempt to find more readers. Thanks in advicance for any criticisms or praise in response to my first foray into writing anal play.

Edit: Because typos. And writing is rewriting.

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The ding-ding of the 6:03am tram, in conjunction with a sweeper truck, stirred Grady to mumble and roll over in sleep. His cheek welcomed the refreshing cool of the pillow while his body made gentle contact with feminine warmth.

Annika was sleeping sprawled on her stomach, pillow punched and gathered beneath her ear, blankets riding low over her hips. She was a hot sleeper, breath low and heavy. Grady easily matched his breathing with hers.

Half lucid, he stroked a hand up and down her back, warm palm meeting morning fresh skin, drifting in that comfortable ‘in between’ amid sleep and dreams. Eyelids flickering with growing wakefulness, he moved his hand moved down to push the blankets away and he caressed the flesh of her buttocks.

Shadowed lilac light broke gently through curtains that weren’t drawn the night before.