The Moment I Saw Her (writing challenge)

So my friend asked me to do a writing challenge and this is what I came up with, she described the setting and had me take it from there.

This is what she wrote

You’re on a bus in a city stopped in traffic when you see a woman — the most exotic, fascinating woman you’ve ever seen. It’s not that she’s beautiful, but she’s magnetic. You’re drawn to her. You pull the yellow string telling the bus to stop as you gather your stuff and head to the front of the bus. The bus driver tells you to sit down. You keep your eyes on the woman as she enters a store (you choose the kind of store). The bus driver finally stops and you turn out your pocket with loose change and cash, hand him a tip of lord knows what, a wad of dollar bills fumbles on the ground but you don’t care. You have to approach this woman. You book it to the store hoping she’s still there. She is.

—- and this is what I continued —-

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Categorized as Erotica