Author: Jimbob_Millionaire

I would be absolutely over the moon especially if redditers have kindle unlimited, to have a read of my first story, I’d be over the moon if you would have a read and send me some feedback or if you like it to leave a star rating, would mean absolutely everything to me as I want to find a way to gain a small income from this, or any tips to promote and get a story off the ground, thank you so much

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You’ve been acting cheeky and a little bratty all night, glancing across the room as you flirt with the new boys in town, unknown to them we’ve been together for years. You kick off your heels and lean back, stroking one of their legs with your toe, checking to see if I’m still watching. I’m sitting there tapping my fingers, seeing how far you’ll go to push my buttons. You lean down and give the boy a view of your wonderfully low top. He reaches up to grab her jaw before I decide enough is enough. I approach and shunt the boy away grabbing your wrist. I land a passionate kiss while my other hand holds your neck softly.

I tell you it’s time we go home, you’ve been a bad girl

You giggle as we enter our place and I slam the door behind. You’re up on the kitchen counter asking what I am going to do to you for misbehaving. I walk along slowly towards you leaving you to wonder about my plans. I open and close drawers and feel the knobs of the cupboards caressing them slowly and reach for the cutlery drawer. I retrieve the wooden spoon, a glimmer in your eye as I behind to stroke it up your leg, beaconing you to open your thighs as I come closer to you. Read more »

Wondering if I can get some feedback on the first section of a story I have written, I have posted it to kindle for a $1 if anyone is interested in reading the full edit. I am brand new to this, please be kind but constructive criticism for the next stories is welcomed, as honestly – I didn’t do well in school.

Jimmy 27M from NZ Original content

UP AGAINST THE WINDOW

After a night of laughter and round after round, we make our way back to your apartment. I kick the door behind as you drag me by the hand to your room and begin to close the windows and curtains.

You’ve been saying how nice of a night you’ve had and how it feels so good to have someone to talk to that understands life as you do and it’s nice to connect with someone like that.

I don’t leave much more time for talking as we’ve been doing that for hours, I’ve been watching your lips talk. I have been thinking about how much I want to kiss them. I come up behind and press myself against you, giving you a little fright, but I see you smile from over your shoulder. Read more »