Hi, I would love feedback on this story as I’m trying to get to a place when I can make publishable erotica. Hope you enjoy!
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Linda’s warm, soft little body laid comfortably in my embrace. We had fallen asleep cuddling naked with each other, her blonde hair ticking my face as I spooned her – the perfect way to end a Saturday evening with my girl. Both of us were in a bit of a daze since we’d had a couple of drinks together. Linda was a pretty shy and modest girl who didn’t drink often, but since I recently introduced her to cider she had taken a bigger liking for it on weekends. She was a short girl too so the drunkenness would hit her fast after just a few bottles, it was really cute but embarressing for her.
Well, this night was going to be embarressing for both of us.
When you feel something wet while sleeping, there’s that survival instinct that calls you to immediately wake up to find out what it is. My sudden jump when I felt a warm, wet liquid running down my legs caused Linda to wake up too.