[M20] Devotion (Sort of a light-erotic poetry thing, and a fantasy. Apologies if this doesn’t really fit the sub.)

Your devotion, that’s what I crave.

You give yourself to me, like a worshipper at an alter, on your knees and ready to obey. Your body is mine, every inch of your skin, every nerve to set alright, owned by me. Your mind comes with it, your will bent to mine, thinking of nothing but service, loyal to your master and happier for it.

My hands caress, rough on your delicate form, every part of you is mine for the taking. Your aspirations, your dreams, your every. waking. thought… You give it all to me, dutiful in your service.

You’re my pet and my princess, my lover and my plaything, and that’s all that matters to you. Serving, loving the one who owns you, giving your everything.

It’s not a simple desire that drives you, no, nothing so basic. It isn’t mindless lust, or curiosity.

When my hand is on your throat, or woven through your hair,
When my breath is on your neck, or my teeth are on your ear…
When I give you a command and you jump to obey, that’s when you find your purpose in life. Servitude, to your owner, your master, your daddy. The name matters little, it’s the one it’s attached to that’s important.

Naomi & Sitra: Blushing Brides [Fantasy Setting][F+F][Public Play][Dom/Sub]

This story is a little lengthy, 13,600 words, roughly 30 pages (that’s why I only have an excerpt here, with a link to the Doc page for the rest of it). So, it may be a time investment depending on how fast you read. Just as a heads up! The pace may also be a little slow for some’s tastes, as it’s not focused 100% on sex at all times.

It follows a pair of my characters, Naomi – a submissive Half-Dragon (basically a human girl with a dragon’s tail and horns), and Sitra – a dominant sorceress (I’m a nerd lol)

It doesn’t delve into any really, extreme kink territory, but it’s not really a “vanilla” type of story, either.

This is my first time making any of my real writing public, so I’d appreciate a gentle hand with criticisms. Without further adieu, I hope you enjoy!

Excerpt –

*The two girls had hardly escaped the sight of their guests before Sitra began a passionate, lustful assault on her new bride. While the party-goers, a mix of many from both women’s social circles, reveled in the festivities, the ruby haired sorceress whisked her lover away for their own, private celebration.*

Poppy & the Princess: A Pauper’s Pampered Pets – Part 1 (Fiction) (FFM)

This is a story my baby girl an I are working on together, switching off and on after each paragraph to see where the other takes things. We’re having fun with it and she liked the idea of putting it up to read, so I’m doing just that. She’s been such a good girl, I’ll happily oblige the request.
So, from her and I both, we hope you enjoy Part 1. There’s quite a lot here, 7 pages or so.