I wrote this for my Game of Thrones x Harry Potter Fanfic – NO SPOILERS. Not sure it counts as Erotica as I avoided getting too detailed (graphic), but not sure where else to put this to get some input.
I never wrote a detailed sex scene before, so basically just wanted opinions. Does this sound good?
**Winter is Ending**
Anna fiercely kissed him. Severus could feel his heart pounding against his chest as they moved towards the bed. He sat down and their lips parted for a moment. Anna seductively let her hair down and straddled his lap. Severus had never been more aroused.
Anna’s heart raced as she began to unbutton his black jacket.
“Are you sure?” Severus asked as he remembered their first attempt. As much as he wanted her, he didn’t want to hurt her.
“Yes,” Anna replied as she removed his jacket. Her body felt like it was on fire and she wanted him, more than anything or anyone. Her hands moved to the buttons on his white shirt and Severus lost all will to argue with her. He fiercely kissed her as she finished removing his shirt. His hands had found their way to the back of her gown and he began to unlace it.