Author: garyothergary

*Author’s note: Planning to make this a long form post as a series. I’m very open to constructive criticism, this is a new thing for me.*

Part 1: [https://www.reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/hhwqyw/deep_in_the_valley_part_1/](https://www.reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/hhwqyw/deep_in_the_valley_part_1/)

Cupping her butt in his hands, pulling her towards him, he devours her. The sudden intensity storms through her and what was initially a sensual temptation takes on another form, as her lust and desire explode within her. He feels her sexual energy emanating from her body, and it drives him single minded into her. She pushes him away and stands up, leaving him on the floor staring up at her. She backs away slowly staring down at him as he crawls toward, his lips unable to separate from her thighs. He grunts at her, begging her to let him pleasure her. Yearning to have her between his lips and toy with her with his tongue. Read more »

*Planning to make this a long form post as a series. I typically improvise role play narrative while in bed but this is my first time writing it down. This is the beginning part of a story I invented in bed with a girl last night. Very open to constructive feedback. I find my ability to write and create interesting descriptions is much better while in bed, I’d be interested in hearing from anyone who feels the same about how the have tried to harness that creativity outside of the bedroom.*

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Two strangers meet on a mountainside in the Pyrenees in late spring, she the girl from just nearby, he the englishman abroad. Both looking to get away from the world, reconnect with nature and the present. As she reaches a connecting path she sees him there enjoying the view preparing his lunch. As she approaches him she takes the opportunity to check him out a little while he’s facing the other way. He’s kind of her type, she notes to herself in her dreamy mountainside temperament.  Read more »