Would love to hear what people think of my writing. I’m considering changing it around to 3rd person; it was originally written *for* someone, so it’s 1st for now.
It’s early evening when you arrive on my doorstep, 7:45 – earlier than I suggested, but not too early. Anke left not that long ago to go out with friends, just as we planned. I hear the soft knock at the door, and a thrill dances through me – you’re here.
I force myself to keep composure as I open the door; I promised myself that I would keep my gaze on your pretty face, but my eyes betray me and I drink in the whole, amazing view. You’re standing there with a totally innocent smile on your face, hair flowing down your shoulders. Your pretty dress, white with a cherry print, not too short, but not knee length either. White knee socks and red pumps accentuating your incredible cuteness.
My cock already bulging, I step aside and invite you in. “Hey, Princess. Lovely to a see you. Come on in and make yourself comfortable”, I smile sweetly. I close the door and follow you into the living room; as you make yourself comfortable, curling your legs under you on the couch, I ask, “can I get you a drink or anything?”.