This is a short story I wrote last night for my girlfriend who’s been begging me for the longest time to write an “erotic/romantic” story for her and i honestly just wanted feedback before showing to to her, so here it is!
Any feedback positive or negative is much appreciated.
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With a sudden rush of calm brought on by the sound of waves crashing on shore just outside, I opened my eyes. Lying on a queen size mattress I pulled the sheets over my waist only to notice something out of the corner of my eye. A fucking gorgeous woman was lying beside me.
“Bella?” Is all I could think to say. And with that, a sly smile crept across your face followed by a soft, tired laugh. “You’re retarded.” You mumbled. I couldn’t help but to laugh at what a smartass you were. I glanced back over to where you were laying just a moment ago only to feel the touch of your soft fingertips tugging at the waist of my boxers.