I need your honest opinion

I am interested in the erotica/Romance genre of books, and I wanted to ask if my writing is good enough.

So I’m just going to ask you to read until the end and tell me if it turned you on, just a bit.

Thank you for reading!

**The Arcade**

Finally, my dream had become a reality, and I was having a date with Hudson. We were in an arcade, acting like children, yet reflecting that touch of innocence and youth that I had led to the path of forgetfulness but still yearned to have it once more. In that arcade, full of energy, full of light, yet still in darkness, full of life, yet still repressing something I still couldn’t quite get the grasp of. There were games, many games where I could easily lose myself in, yet I wanted to live this moment with him, Hudson Clark, the only person who made me feel this way. The only person to whom I devoted myself to, whose kiss I desired and had so desired for too long.

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Categorized as Erotica