Good afternoon Reddit!
I'm going to be publishing a 10k word or so novella to Amazon this weekend and I wanted to share with you one of my favorite paragraphs to gauge your interests and see if you have any helpful hints or tips.
The main premise is a housewife is told by her out of town husband he's had fantasies of sharing her with other men. She takes to her next door neighbors son who is home from college and his best friend. There's light femdom, vouyerism, exhibitionism, forced bi, and rough sex.
Let me know what you think!
They looked less dumbstruck than I had imagined, maybe they expected some sacrifices. They took a deep breath, and grabbed one another in a strangely erotic tight hug, and let their lips and tongues dance together for me. It was soft at first, they were each feeling each other out to see what the other one would do. My hand slipped into my panties and started rubbing against the warmth of my overwhelming excitement and new found love of control. Their arms embraced one another, as they kept stealing glances at the front door. Lips started biting other bottom lips, tongues intertwined, a little drool dripped from their mouths. I was pressed so hard against the door I had almost forgotten it was there. I slipped a finger into my soaking wet pussy, just for a brief glimpse of the feelings I was craving and was inevitably going to have.