Hello there! This is my first submission: I’ve been told by friends I have a knack for writing erotica, but I’d like the internet’s greater opinion. Here’s a piece I wrote a few months ago. I’ve deliberately decided to write my smut in a first person perspective, as I believe it makes the scene more “intimate” for the reader. I welcome all your feedback, both positive and constructive criticism!
The grade on your test has a big, red F emblazoned on the front, large enough that even your classmates sitting next to you can notice. Underneath, in unnecessarily bold text are the words “SEE ME AFTER CLASS.” The bright red marker is almost like a brand, somehow making you feel like you stick out. You can see other student’s papers, and none of them seem to have such loud red markings.
As the last student leaves, you’re left with your desk in the middle of the room, and at the front I sit, looking down at you from my larger desk. You can feel my stare pierce through you, as though I’m seeing straight into your most personal thoughts and desires.