What are your thoughts on this story? It has a deep message, try to decipher it – you may need to dig deep, though. My comments are posted under the story

“Omar is a young Persian man living in an extended family in Iran. However, Omar has a sister who leads a very unconventional lifestyle” – this is the WRITING PROMPT of the essay that the participants of the writing activity received – the rest is what I produced. “Omar’s sister is a lesbian. She is so passionate about her sexual orientation that she wants to earn money by uploading her video content on special websites. One day she invites her partner to cooperate on a project and then upload it on the Internet. They do so successfully. The video gets very popular in Iran and neighboring countries. Omar’s father, a very perverted person, surfs on the Internet, watching one video after another. All of a sudden, the father comes across to that very video and goes downstairs to find his gun. He looks for it for an hour, then seven hours, then realizes that his daughter is just another perverted person, and they could become good partners and make a name for themselves in the industry, breaking all the stereotypes.

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