Author: AcceptablyMediocre69

As promised, here’s the male POV for the story I posted just a bit ago (brand new to writing). Looking for some feedback. TIA!

If you haven’t read the female POV: [https://www.reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/qf8c6o/my_first_attempt_at_writing_erotica_and_looking/](https://www.reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/qf8c6o/my_first_attempt_at_writing_erotica_and_looking/)

Jane was an amazing young woman. This was our first date and it couldn’t have gone any better. I wasn’t sure what to expect meeting somebody in person for the first time who I had met through a dating app, but tonight was by far the best date I have ever been on. She was funny, exuberant, great at small talk, and made it feel like we had known each other for years. Add her unmatched beauty, and I couldn’t have asked for more. Unfortunately, our two-and-a-half-hour dinner date had to come to an end sooner or later. After spending such a wonderful evening with her, I was actually quite sad to be taking her back home. The fun continued on the drive back to drop her off at her apartment. I could tell the alcohol from dinner had made her quite a bit tipsy with the way she was giggling and joking with me. I was able to keep myself together until we pulled up in front of her apartment building. Read more »

My first attempt at writing erotica and looking for some feedback. This version is the female POV. The male POV will be posted shortly. TIA! 🙂

Update – I have posted the male POV: [https://www.reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/qf8fs9/as_promised_heres_the_male_pov_for_the_story_i/](https://www.reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/qf8fs9/as_promised_heres_the_male_pov_for_the_story_i/)

As we arrived back at my two-bedroom apartment, I was feeling the effects of the alcohol we had with dinner. Along with being slightly dizzy and feeling a little goofy, my mind was also gravitating toward a darker, more lustful side I don’t experience often. We had such a wonderful time at dinner that I wasn’t ready for the night to end, and I think Ethan could read it on my face. Once he put the car in park, he shut off the engine and asked me if I wanted him to walk me up to my apartment. Aside from my inability to climb the flight of stairs on my own, I was wanting a little more from him on this beautiful night. He kindly helped me out of the car and put his arm around me to stabilize me as I walked along the sidewalk and up the stairs to the landing in front of my apartment. I wasn’t sure if it was my drunkenness or lust that caused me to drop my keys as I was fumbling to unlock the door, but it was definitely the lust that led me to bend over so far that my bubbly little ass pushed back into his groin. I played it off as a drunken accident and started giggling about it, but for that moment I was pressing into him, I could feel a nice big bulge. As if the thoughts going through my mind weren’t already getting my heart rate up, feeling what he was packing made it that much more intense. Read more »