Catherine’s Folly [Heavy non-con] [Orgasm Denial] [M/F]

Hello all, this is the first sex scene in a potential multi-part series I’m writing with a very heavy focus on corruption featuring Catherine, a hapless paladin. My writing style tends to be fairly long-form, and I’ve cut quite a bit of build-up to give you all a better sense of my actual erotic writing, so if you like it please let me know and I’ll be sure to add more!

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The door to Catherine’s rented room in the dingy tavern swings open as she’s carried to her bed by two men. She should have known better than to accept drinks from strangers, but she’d been so excited after her first ever successful contract as an adventurer that she’d gotten swept up in the excitement – now she was paying for it.

As they lay her on the bed, it’s all she can do not to throw up at the sudden shift in orientation. She can make out their voices as they whisper to one another, but whatever they’re saying is lost amidst the throbbing drum of her own heartbeat; impossibly loud in her ears as the world seems to spin around her. She tries to tell them not to lay her down but the words come out as an incomprehensible mumble, slurred beyond recognition.

Question for the readers and writers of Erotica

Hello everyone, my question isn’t too complicated and it basically boils down to: how much set up is too much when it comes to erotica?

I’ve been writing non-erotic fiction for a while, and when I dipped my toes into erotic writing I found I would spend a lot of time setting up the story, characters, etc before getting to the actual, you know, sex.

I’m writing something currently that’s about 1600 words long, and I’ve only just gotten to the start of the sex scene – is that too much? As a bit of added context, I’m intending for this to be a longer running , potentially multi-chapter kind of story. Thanks in advance for any responses!

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