On the west coast of LA, the land of deviation and perversion, resides young Emily a perky girl in her mid-20s. She was that kind of attractive girl, she got a sexy wasp-waisted figure like hourglass, being sexier with her luscious firm boobs and cute curvy bum. Her blossom soft lips with her halo-white teeth gave her a charming smile no man could resist.
She would usually twist up her golden blond hair into a ponytail to fit with her colorful tank tops, or she’d just let it crash over her glossy skin. Above all, her dangerous weapon was her ocean blue eyes that would easily break your heart if you choose to get close.
Emily lived a happy life; she was independent woman making money out of her own business. She was a people person too because she was friendly with everyone, yet she still has got some problems ruining her happiness. Most importantly the struggles in her sex life with noob guys who don’t know how to really satisfy her and fill her ravenous desire.
During summer holiday Emily was bored; nothing interesting in her life, she didn’t have much close friends and hers were just average with nothing special. One day she was watching porn for some amusement and self-pleasure when she came across a video made her so horny that she got her orgasm easier than usual!
The scene was about a gym coach who fucked his client in an erogenous way. It wasn’t just a hook up video; it was a passionate video inspired by a real story. She kept masturbating to this salacious piece of erotica for a while.
Emily felt the urge to turn the fantasy into reality because she got impressed by the passion of that video. She wanted to manifest it with another man, a real man who can handle her and awaken her wild horny side. She wanted to feel a different kind of orgasm from the one she experienced alone watching the erotica.
In one of their hangouts one of her friends told her about a new gym opening next week and offering special kind of service. At that moment an idea came to Emily’s mind, and decided to join this gym to see if that would fill her emptiness that was caused by the lack of satisfying sex.
The next day she went to the gym to check it out. As she was new she had to ask somebody for help. She got her eyes on an attractive brawny coach who was going around helping people and giving advice.
“Unbelievable, that’s a special service now!” Said Emily to herself. She approached him and started a talk. “Hi! I’m just new here, and I was wondering if you could help me.” Said Emily. “Hi! Yeah! sure. Let me show you around then we talk about the details.” Said the coach.
As they were talking, she was staring at him. Her mind was full of smutty thoughts, and her pussy was dripping of the heat of his charisma. “It’s really a pleasure to meet you Mr. Roger” said Emily. “Thank you, it’s my pleasure too” Said coach Roger.
Young Emily decided to join the gym and they told her to choose one of their coaches as a personal trainer. Without hesitation, she chose coach Roger whom she just met, but really got attracted to.
Time passed and Emily got to know Roger more, and they became friendly with each other, really friendly that they used to flirt and laugh together while he used to instruct her in her workout. She was secretly staring at his ripped body and his big bulge every time she got a chance to.
“Hey Emily how is it going, how is the new gym?” said one of her friends. “It’s just amazing, I wish they opened long time ago. I’m having fun there, and I also met a hot guy” said Emily. “Oh! That’s interesting, I think we should join you.” said her friend. “Sorry girls, I’m keeping this guy for myself, no sharing this time” Said Emily. She and her friends used to take turns in fucking the same guy, but this time she surely won’t sacrifice her new special guy even for the sake of friendship.
One day Emily was at the gym doing squats. “No Emily, you don’t play squats this way. You need to lean a bit more and don’t go all way down. Lemme tell you how to do it.” Said coach Roger and walked her way.
He stood behind her and put his hands under her booty. “Just reach to the level of my hands and go all way up.” Said Roger. She did exactly what he said, but she was intentionally pushing her booty against his hands.
She felt the passion being built and wanted him to touch her, and he felt that too. So, he started touching her tenderly. Fire was burning between her pussy lips, and she felt her pantie dampen.
At that moment she was sure it’s the time for it, she left to the locker room in a hurry, and gave him a wink, a sign to follow her and that’s exactly what he did. “Am I dreaming or my dream came true!” Said Emily to herself.
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/cc2cik/emilys_hot_coach_is_a_short_yet_very_hot_erotic
Please work on your grammar. It’s very difficult to read smoothly as is currently written. Good luck, and you need better adjectives.
I’m already pausing because LA is ON the West Coast. You wouldn’t say “On the west coast of LA.” You might say the west side, or the coast of LA, but there is no “west coast of LA.”
“young Emily a perky girl in her mid-20s…” Need a comma after Emily.
“she got a sexy wasp-waisted figure like hourglass…” She *had*. Like *an* hourglass.
“being sexier with her luscious firm boobs and cute curvy bum…” This is the end of a run-on sentence, so the whole thing really needs to be reworked.
I will not be reading it on Wattpad, since the content is not my style and I’m not being paid to edit, but I encourage you to stick with writing and work on your grammar. Best of luck.