Date night with my stupid girl.

As way of introduction. I’m not a writer. I wrote this as a fantasy for my sub. It was written over a fair period of time and I have done my best to make it readable. Anyway enjoy.

Your sitting at your desk typing away at your new computer when a delivery man arrives with a bunch of roses. Looking for ‘my little girl’?? He asks. He places them down and you read the card. ‘Congrats on the new job. Dinner tonight 7:30. Dress is formal’.
You spend the remainder of the day nervous at what’s to come. You finish work and rush home to shower and get ready. You sit in the couch nervously waiting.

A town car arrives outside your apartment and you step from your door to get in. The driver opens the rear door for you. Inside I am waiting, a flute of champagne ready for you. “Hello my lil slut” is all I say. The short drive to the restaurant is spent in silence. You know better than to attempt small talk.

We enter the restaurant and are seated straight away. A waiter arrives and places a menu in front of me and goes to place one before you. She is met with a look from me. “She won’t be needing one thank you”. She departs a disapproving look on her face.
“Tell me about your new job” I ask finally giving you permission to speak. You tell me all about the details you have learned. The office and the other people there. Enjoying the attention I give you. A different waiter returns. I order for both. You smile as I order your favourite pasta dish to the detail.

Once our order is takin and the waiter leaves. I look you over. Taking in every freckle and the shape of your face and neck. “Your not collared little slut” I exclaim. More a statement than a question. You stammer excuses before lowering your eyes and saying “I’m not ready to be in public, Sir” from your lowered eyes you see me reach into my jacket. “Here” I say drawing your attention to the box on the table.
You shyly take it hoping it isn’t the leather collar you wear. Opening it you see a light chain necklace with a small padlock pendant. I stand and take it placing it around your neck and kissing your cheek as I do. “Now u can be mine in public and no one will know” I whisper into your ear.

We finish dinner and I excuse myself to pay the bill. On my return I pause as I walk past only one word to you “come” then I head to the door. The car is waiting and I hold the door for you, as you climb in, I say “We’re visiting some friend now slut. Do I need to remind you to be on your best behaviour?”
Another short drive in silence your stomach in knots over what will happen.
The car pulls into a dark car park and I exit the car. Holding the door for you I take your hand as you exit.
We walk to a door lit only by a dim light. Before I knock I turn to you. Limits??
You list your limits instinctively as you get more n more curious. Safeword? Again the words fall from your lips. Almost without you thinking. “Good girl” I remark.

I knock lightly on the door and turn slightly looking at a camera you missed. The door opens and I gesture for you to enter.
Inside the door the room is dim yet very tasteful. A man who could pass as a butler yet has the build of a body guard welcomes us. “Good to see you again sir”
He barely looks in your direction simply giving you a nod. “Does the lady understand the code of conduct Sir?”
I reply “she is house trained yes” at this I turn to you and remove your collar from my jacket. Stepping behind you i unclasp your new necklace handing it to the door man. “See that it is safe” I attach your collar and lower the zip on your dress. Letting it fall. “Pick it up n hand it to Thomas now”
You do as ordered and return to my side. Wearing only your heals. Taking your trained position. I attach your collar and leash before we walk through a large oak door opened by the door man. the door opens on a lightly lit club various people in various dress mingle and chat. You see both male and female subs all being led by leads or sitting by their masters knee. Leather clad or in tight latex costume. Your eyes swirl at the goings on.

You try and take in as much as you can while keeping your eyes down turned. You see alcoves off the main room where u see different types of furniture. A bench in one. Something that’s looks like a stock from a castle. A large timber X in another.

From the corner of my eye I see you peaking around. I pull your lead untill your face to face with me. “Which do u choose slut?”
You point at the stock it’s something new to you and your very keen to experience it.
“Good choice my dirty little cum whore” I gesture to a waiter and he walks away. Moments later returning and leading us to another part of the club. We enter a semi private room and it smells recently cleaned. Similar to a hospital but not unpleasant.

I lead you to the device and pull your lead into the bigger hole. You submit. I take your hands and put them in the smaller holes. Lowering the heavy timber onto your neck and wrists I make eye contact. “Light, my pet?” I ask, you answer your safe question with “Green Sir”
I stand and disappear from view. This device has your hands and neck secure however a Cross beam has you bent at the waist another keeping your legs straight and as you find a comfortable position you feel your legs pulled and shackled. Spreading them to the brink of comfort.
You test your restraints and find u can move very little. The cross beams are padded but the position has your muscles tensed. Relaxing one puts strain on others so you must try n cycle through your body’s fading strength.

I return to your view and take your chin in my finger tips forcing open your mouth I push a ring gag between your teeth it tastes of disinfectant. This one is wider than your used to and you think to yourself this isn’t to just shut me up. The drool all most instantly begins to dribble down your chin.
A gentle slap to your cheek shows my appreciation.
Your mind is drawn to the feeling of your wetness. You feel it on your thighs and begin to notice the way your clit is buzzing
Your mind is very quickly bought back to the present as a very loud crack and a searing pain rips across your ass cheeks. You try n scream through the gag but it only causes more drool down your chin.

A gentle hand caresses you burning ass you relax again. Your muffled scream has caused a few faces to peer between the curtains. You make eye contact with another sub who is lead by a woman in leather she smiles and quickly turns her head.
Soon you feel the hands on your breasts caressing and gently pinching at your nipples and pulling at your piercings.
Then as you feel your body react to the gentle stimulus , searing pain as something is clipped to each nipple. Your eyes bulge as the device clamps down biting into the flesh. You feel your skin scream with pleasure as an orgasm is teased from your body.
I tie a small length of string to each clamp and secure them to the frame. Providing slight tension on your nipples. A swift smack too your ass and I am happy at how much your breast are held in place.

Happy with my work I circle u slowly running my hands over your skin, across your back, up the back of your legs. Again a solid smack to your ass, then another. My hand pausing as you feel the burn of your skin. My fingers trail between your ass cheeks and trail circles around your tight little asshole.
Pressing harder a force a single finger inside you. Teasing you open. My finger withdraws and I spread your cheeks apart. Something cold and wet replacing my finger. You instinctively try to relax knowing it’s a thick metal plug. You feel it press to your hole and begin to open your tight little fuck hole. Further and further untill your body relents and it enters you. You feel your muscles burn as they return to hug the cold metal plug inside you.

As your body accepts both the pain and the pleasure I appear in front of u. “Eyes up lil slut”. “That’s two of your three” “are u ready for more???” You respond with a subdued nod.
A slight smirk gives away my happiness I stand and turn to the curtain and leave. Returning with a woman. She is dressed all in leather. Her blonde hair messy on her shoulders. But what draws your attention is the rubber cock she has strapped to her pubic area.
“My little slut this is mistress. She is going to join us. If you approve??”
Again you hold back your excitement and nod ever so slightly. You know showing your lust only brings harsh punishment.

We both smile as I pull the curtains open. “By the way, my little fuck holes, your one of the attractions tonight” I announce to the club.
Mistress waist no time and moves to your face. Pressing the cock to your open mouth. Bracing herself on the wood behind your head. She forces it through the gag and into your throat. Slowing she pumps your open mouth. Mean while I have my hand on your lower back and my fingers trail between your ass cheeks. A light flick of your plug. Then down between your legs. I find your dripping cunt and slide two fingers in. I finger your dripping hole while pressing your plug with my thumb.

As mistress pumps you see people gather to watch.
They point and discuss, I slap my hand firmly to your rump. And a cheer comes from the crowd. Lust has taken over your body and you moan around the rubber cock in your mouth. I continue to finger fuck your hole. Adding more fingers to stretch your cunt. You writhe and bend straining at the restraints as an orgasm builds. More slaps on your ass and your clit takes over and you cum to cheers from the crowd.
Mistress and I withdraw and I join her in front of you. We embrace and kiss hard in front of you. She then moves to your now buzzing cunt. She straps another cock to her harness and you feel it press to your fuck hole. It’s bigger and you feel every ridge and bump on it’s surface as she forces it all the way inside you.

I am standing before you my cock out and you see it throb and bounce. I remove your gag and you relax your tired jaw. My cock now aimed at your wanting lips I hold my position as you try to take it. You beg to taste it and I bring my hand across your cheek hard.
Again the crowd cheers. “You know better than to try and touch my cock with out permission cunt.” I say. As the rubber cock in your pussy pounds away you can only moan and groan as my cock brushes your lips. “Open” is all I say as I grab your hair and force my cock Into your mouth.

The night becomes a blur of gagging slapping and cumming. Your body is spent you slump against your restraints and I step in front of you and finally cum across your face. Your eyes close and you pass out from exhaustion. You feel hands releasing you from the stock and you vaguely remember me carrying you. Your wrapped in warmth as I lower you into a hot bath. I take a sponge and clean you from your toes to gently washing your face.
I feed you cut up fruit and place a straw into your mouth to sip. Gently nursing you until you wake and can focus. Pulling you from the bath a wrap you in a giant towel and carry you to the car waiting by a side door, placing you gently in I kiss your forehead “ you did very well my little girl”.

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/c4twiv/date_night_with_my_stupid_girl

5 comments

  1. Your sub would appreciate paragraphs. I would imagine reading this wall of text would be similar to being beaten and choked without interruption or oxygen. Tip: Subs are best kept alive.

  2. Is there a reason you use you sometimes and “u” at others? I couldn’t really read it to be honest, that combined with the formatting made it more than a chore.

  3. You won’t get any better if you get patted on the back for not putting in your best effort. You have a story to tell but it gets lost in the lack of formatting and grammatical choices, you’re doing yourself a disservice by not taking the extra time to make it presentable.

  4. At no time did i say “hey can you tear my work to pieces I really want to be a better writer on Reddit” I’m happy to take constructive feedback but you two are taking the piss.

  5. I thought that the content of this story was really good to the point where I came halfway through. Dont let the rude comments get you down because I didnt even notice the bad grammar :)

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