Coming Home: A soldier’s first attemp [MF, STR8, oral, Fdom] looking for F feedback. What do you think?

So this is a dream I had last night in a foreign country. I'm deployed with the Army and have been away from my wife of 20 years for 8 months. She has a libido problem and intimacy issues. Every time I try to broach the subject of our sex life she clams up. We have sex maybe 3 times a month. She enjoys it, but she has only initiated sex twice in our relationship. She holds a masters degree in English so I thought maybe a short story couched as a dream might wake her up a little bit. By the way have I told you she's never gone down on me, has to have the lights off, and is all natural when it comes to hygiene. This is my "STORY". You are wearing a white strapless dress that comes to just above your knees. It has a royal blue wide belt. Your legs are covered in nylons that has a seam down the back and you are wearing cute little blue ballet slippers. Your hair is up off of your neck in a little twist, but there are little wisps outlining your face. You have on your pearl necklace and ear rings, your Pandora bracelet, and a new Lotus flower tattoo on your left shoulder. ??? Yeah, I know, it’s a dream!!! It’s weird how well I still can remember this dream. You were radiant; you were sun kissed and your freckles were standing out on your shoulders. You were waiting with the other wives, but your beauty set you apart. I only saw my beautiful wife. Waiting in formation, listening to the speeches, watching you talk with the other wives caused a deep stirring inside of me. When they finally released us, you surprised me by pulling me into a deep kiss right there in front of everyone. I remember we were laughing and I realized the kids weren’t with you. You said it was too early for them so you took me by the hand and walked me to the car. As we climbed into the car you leaned across and buckled me into the driver’s seat, giving me an appreciative view of your cleavage, gave me a quick rough kiss and told me you had a little surprise for me with a very mischievous look in your eye. I pulled out of the parking lot and started driving you home. As I was driving you took my hand in yours and started kissing the tips of my fingers. I was having a hard time concentrating, but you had a couple more surprises up your sleeve. You looked over at me, locking my eyes with yours and slowly sucked my middle finger into your mouth. It took my breath away. This simple act shot a bolt of pleasure right to my groin. I let out an audible moan and my penis strained against my uniform anticipating getting you home. We still lived on base in the dream so I didn’t have long to go. As you pulled my finger out of your mouth you shyly whispered that you had a surprise for me. You took my hand and laid it on your knee, placed your hand on top of mine and slowly ran it up your thigh, pulling up the skirt of your dress, exposing brown lace and the tops of your exposed thighs. You were wearing nude thigh high stockings. I almost lost control of the car. You let out this little giggle and asked me, “Do you like?” I didn’t have words. Who is this woman sitting next to me? I pull in the driveway and move to the house preparing myself for the onslaught of the kids, but as soon as I open the door you shut it behind us and pull me into your arms and kiss me with a deep longing from 9 months of separation. I lose all sense of time. I am lost to the fact that the kids aren’t here. It is just you and me. ( I can still feel the butterflies in my stomach from the anticipation I felt in the dream. ) We break apart and you tell me ”the kids are at Stephanie’s and I have you for the morning.” You grab me again and pull me against you in a long deep kiss. The taste of your lips and your natural smell are intoxicating. I can feel the swell of your breasts crushed against me and it takes my breath away. I move from your lips and softly kiss your forehead and move to your eye lids. You have little tears of joy at the corners of your eyes and I kiss them away. You have candles lit throughout the house and it smells of citrus and cherry blossom. It’s your smell. I run my teeth along the side of your neck and you let out a soft moan. I slowly unzip the back of your dress, but you step away quickly not wanting to rush anything. God you are so beautiful and sexy. Your eyes are half closed and you’re biting your lower lip as if you are intoxicated with the tension between us. I move to you, pulling my shirt over my head, reaching out and pulling you into my arms again (by the way I have a rock hard body in my dreams). I like the way the dress feels against my skin I slowly move my hands down your exposed back tracing small circles with my nails. You lightly dig your nails into my shoulders and start kissing and nibbling at my neck, one word: heaven. I move my hands up to your shoulders and neck and pull you into a long tender kiss that builds with tension, losing myself in the feel of your tongue darting slowly in touching mine feeling your heart beat against my chest. I slip the dress down off of your shoulders and watch it fall to the floor. Your beauty takes my breath away. A gasp catches in my throat. You start to undo by belt as I take in the site of this muse in front of me. You’re in a white sheer lace bra and panties; your nipples erect playing against the fabric in excitement and yearning for me to touch you. The thigh highs give you a slightly naughty look that I’ve never seen from you. I start to kiss you on your neck and move my way down to the swell of your breasts. I Reach back and unhook your bra with one hand as I pull your right breast out with the other. Your skin is exquisite in my hand. The contrast of the tan on my hand and the milky whiteness of your breast is heady. Your breast is so supple and tender; I watch the nipple slowly stiffen and come to life under my stare. You push your chest out ever so slightly moving your breast into my mouth as I lightly tease the nipple with a gentle bite, you grab the back of my head and pull yourself to me getting more and more aroused as my hands massage your legs and butt. God I love the way the muscles of your legs tense when I gently squeeze you. I kneel down and begin to kiss your belly, your sides: a flick of my tongue a gentle scrape of my teeth. Your stomach quivers under my touch. It is such a turn on for me. I love the way your hands feel in my hair, gently pulling it and scratching my scalp with your nails. I move to your hips and your knees almost give way from the pleasure that I can tell is mounting through your body, you catch your breath when I move my hands between your legs, gently caressing you through your panties. I can smell you, it is your smell, a gentle sweet musky smell that tells me to continue. You are wet to my touch and I can’t wait any longer I move my mouth over you and taste you, running my tongue along you, you thrusting forward and pulling me to you ever so rougher. All I can think is how much I love this woman in my arms. I slowly begin to remove your panties kissing you along your hip and inner thigh. I catch my breath in surprise, you’ve trimmed so close, and left so little pubic hair. You only have a little patch above your sex. I feel the gentle skin of your sweet gift to me. It is the most turned on I have ever been, my body convulses from the desire I have for you. I slowly turn you around and begin to kiss your bottom while my hands move over you . I playfully bite your inner thigh and you open your legs a little wider, as you thrust backwards, leaning your arms against the wall for support. I can see you now, and it is the most beautiful site I have ever seen. Your familiar mole is such a great contrast against the smooth skin left by your risqué treat. I wrap my arms around you and gently move my fingers along your outer lips, teasing your sex, tracing you and feeling your body react to my touch. A moan escapes you as I gently stroke you with my hand and tongue. I gently part you with my fingers as you grind back against my face forcing my tongue deeper inside you. I love the way you taste and the way you are reacting to my touch. I insert a finger gently stroking you as my tongue explores you from behind. You arch your back pushing your pussy and ass against my mouth, an unbidden moan escaping from deep inside you. The smell of your sex, mixed with the lotion you have on your body, is enthralling. As my tongue and fingers work you from behind you shyly slide your fingers lower brushing the tips against your clit making you dripping wet. You pull away and turn around. You pull me to my feet and lead me to our bedroom. The look in your eyes both excites me and frightens me at the same time from the intensity I see in them. You push me down on the bed and begin to undress me biting my stomach and sides. I’m fully aroused and you playfully run your hands over me cupping me, sending pain and pleasure through my body that only you can do. As you pull my pants down my erection sits inches from your mouth. You bite your lip and have a look of hesitation and wonder in your eyes. I haven’t seen this side of you before. I slowly see something change in your eyes, there’s a new confidence and a little naughtiness that wasn’t there seconds before. You’ve made a decision. You run your tongue along the shaft of my erection, stroking its length with your mouth, from the base to the head. You move back down and deliciously lick me back and forth. You take me in your hand and with a gentle squeeze a drop of cum seeps out of me. You look up into my eyes and run your tongue around the head, you smile as you taste me for the first time and murmur a little, “mmmm.” We lock eyes and you slowly take me in your mouth. I almost spill my seed right there. Your hand works up and down while you cover your teeth with your lips and move me in and out of your mouth. You start slowly unsure of yourself, but with a newfound confidence you build up speed the whole time, staring up at me with your bright beautiful blue eyes. Seeing the lust building in you almost takes me over the edge. You stop and slowly kiss your way up my body teasing me, tugging at my nipples with your teeth biting my earlobe. You climb on top of me but not as I expect. You turn around and straddle my face, slowly lowering your sex onto my mouth. My tongue explores every inch of you. I move my hands to your hips and pull you back, thrusting my tongue deeper into you. You want control and it is so sexy. My hands are everywhere, exploring you, touching every inch of your backside, you push back against them and another deeper moan escapes your mouth. I know what I’m doing is pleasing you, but I want your pleasure to never end. I take your hand in mine and guide it to the apex of your sex. While you are grinding your sex against my mouth you slowly begin circling your clitoris with your own fingers. I can feel you working yourself into a faster pace, getting more and more aroused, getting wetter and wetter, taking yourself deeper and deeper into ecstasy, with my mouth and your hand. I feel your pussy tighten and then convulse over me. You let out a carnal scream that has been building for twenty years. I am in awe. You are not done with me though. I roll you under me and slowly kiss my way down to you. I caress your breasts and suck on your nipples sending electrical impulses straight to your clit. I make my way down you reveling and mesmerized in the site of only the little tuft of pubic hair left. I am amazed that you love me this much. I trace you again with my tongue. You are so wet with anticipation and carnal pleasure. I love your taste, it intoxicates me. I move my tongue up to your clitoris, parting you as you thrust up against my chin pulling my head deeper with your hands, guiding me, moving your hips to the rhythm you want set. My hands explore every inch of you, taking you higher and deeper towards ecstasy. I can feel you swell against me, getting deeper and deeper aroused. As I move up and down you, massaging every part of you, tracing every line of your body with my hands, you tracing the lines of your body with your own hands; Exploring yourself, squeezing your breasts because my hands are elsewhere, your thumb and fingers rolling your nipples pulling them into a painful pleasure that begins to build you even higher. There’s something in the way I’m doing things that you can’t control and you’ve decided today is about you, so you roll over on top of me again, but you stay over my mouth grinding against it, starring down into my eyes daring me to take you over the edge again. You cum so violently that you actually release your juices over my face. You taste of raw emotion and summer. It is amazing the way you feel straddling me, controlling your body over me. It’s intoxicating. You move down and sit off to my side and to my surprise kiss me! Deeply! Tasting yourself on my lips. I can’t believe this is the same woman I left to go to war. You have a playful dreamy look in your eyes that stops my heart in my chest. You begin kissing me slowly at first but then deeper as your hands begin exploring my body. You massage my sides making me jump from being tickled, but I like the way it feels. You move to my hip and lightly bite my inner thigh which makes me jump with desire while at the same time you take my penis in your hand and gently caress me. I run my hands through your hair wishing for what is about to come next. You begin lightly stroking me, while at the same time taking me in your mouth. You cover your teeth with your lips again and take me all the way into your mouth swirling your tongue around me, letting out a deep moan of pleasure. The sensation of being in your mouth and the sounds you are making almost sends me over the edge, but you slow down and squeeze my base stopping me. You continue to do this. Each time I’m about to cum stopping until I can’t take it anymore. I pull you on top of me your weight pressed against me, your mouth on me as I bury my tongue in your pussy again, while you continue to work me in and out of your mouth. You have completely lost all inhibition. Taking control has brought out a side of you that amazes me and has made you dripping with desire. I can’t take much more and you sense this. You stop and pull me to my knees. You turn around and wiggle your ass in the air and say, “I want you to take me like this.” Melody you amaze me. I take myself in my hand and slowly tease your sex with the tip of my penis. You are so wet from riding my face. Both of your holes are glistening with your juices. I massage you with the tip of my penis until you start to whimper. The tension is palpable. You reach back to guide me into you, but I stop you. I need to be one with you. You need me to be in you. Your head is on the pillow and you’re looking back at me. You say the magic words. “I want you inside me.” The look of love and shared desire between us melts me, but stirs a new found urgency, as I gently push inside you feeling your tightness against me. The warmth of you is intoxicating. The air is filled with the smell of our longing and love. We move together, rhythmically, slowly at first, then with a greater urgency. You meet me with every thrust. To my surprise you move your hand underneath you, grinding your clit against your fingers and my cock as deep as it will go. Guiding yourself to another release. My hands are splayed on your ass and my thumb gently grazes your anus. The sensation of being filled by my penis, and both your clit and bum being massaged, takes you to the breaking point. With one last thrust back you take yourself over the chasm. I see in your eyes that you are there, I feel your body tense, the quiver in your stomach, the tightening of your bottom against my hands, as I thrust deeper inside you. Shouting your name and coming to the point of utter ecstasy myself. Totally spent you take my hand and lead me to the shower. That’s when I woke up.

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/3j7ijl/coming_home_a_soldiers_first_attemp_mf_str8_oral