This is a short story I wrote last night for my girlfriend who’s been begging me for the longest time to write an “erotic/romantic” story for her and i honestly just wanted feedback before showing to to her, so here it is!
Any feedback positive or negative is much appreciated.
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With a sudden rush of calm brought on by the sound of waves crashing on shore just outside, I opened my eyes. Lying on a queen size mattress I pulled the sheets over my waist only to notice something out of the corner of my eye. A fucking gorgeous woman was lying beside me.
“Bella?” Is all I could think to say. And with that, a sly smile crept across your face followed by a soft, tired laugh. “You’re retarded.” You mumbled. I couldn’t help but to laugh at what a smartass you were. I glanced back over to where you were laying just a moment ago only to feel the touch of your soft fingertips tugging at the waist of my boxers.
A sudden rush of ecstasy washed over me as I felt you lower your mouth onto my cock. Each rise and fall of your head set me deeper in a state of pure euphoria. Every muscle in my body seemed to contract just as you raised your head making sure not to let me cum without you.
You slid your slender body from under the covers, revealing your porcelain skin. Your breast were the very definition of curves. And I had never been so sure about anything in my life. Leaning into each other I planted a kiss on your lips, and you returned the act immediately.
“Isn’t it about time you return the favor?” You asked in a teasing voice as you stood up beside me with a hand on your hip.
Without a word I picked you up and tossed you with your back down on the bed giving the perfect view of your pussy. Lowering my head slowly, I start tracing gentle kisses starting at your neck, to your breast, traveling to your waist than back up to your neck once more. I kept repeating till it was obvious you couldn’t wait anymore.
I lowered my head between your thighs, and with each moan that escaped your throat I knew you were getting closer. After some time, you began to tense. And just like you did with me, I stopped and gave you a smirk.
“How about you go fuck yourself?” You said.
“Now why would I do that with you here?”
You pushed me on the bed and positioned yourself above my cock. Slowly lowering yourself onto me. With a hand placed on my chest, you began riding back and forth.
Your pace built, our breathing grew heavier,
We started grinding our bodies against one another. And with your moans it’s all I could do.
“Fuck b, I’m gonna cum.”
“Then cum.” you said, still riding without hesitation.