New to writing

Hi I’m new to writing this type of stuff. It excites me so much. I find it cringey and sexy at the same time. I find myself getting horny when I write. I’m open to pointers and any advice. I have so many thoughts in my head I want to share them.

It was finally happening. Iris was sitting on the couch pallet next to me. I looked over at Brian. He sat relaxed with his legs open locks in a bun.

Iris took my face in her hand and pulled me in for a kiss. I kissed her back. I let her control how we kissed, but every so often I would bite her bottom lip Unexpectedly. She grabbed me by the neck and I let out a moan. I completely relaxed against her lips and gave my throat to her completely. I began to rub her breast through her top. Holding them in my palms squeezing them through her shirt. She began to mirror me.

Brian watched us on the pallet making out and touching each other through our clothes. He was completely focused on us. Enjoying our little show. He took his hair out of the bun and let his hand rest on his dick.

I was tired of waiting. I pushed iris on her back and got on top of her. I was so ready for her and Brian I was practically vibrating.

Brian stood up and walked over to us. He grabbed me by the hair and made me look at him. He looked down at my face. “Why you rushing?” He didn’t let me answer.
He took my lips in his mouth and made me swallow his Tongue. He held my face and forced me to not move. His lips moved against mine but his tongue was deep in my throat. Iris under me slipped her fingers in my panties and began to massage my clit. I loved the attention. I rode my hips against Iris hand and completely gave myself to Brian’s kiss.

Iris was rubbing my clit so lightly that my grinding created the perfect pressure. I was moaning now. “Ah ah” Brian said.

He picked me up sat me next to iris. He picked her up. He grabbed her face and kissed her. I watched them. It was so hot. I began to undress iris . I sat behind her and grabbed her breast. I played with them and kissed her neck.

I loved watching her get dominated.

Iris lied down. And I crawled between her legs. Brian gave me a light spank.

I kissed her lower stomach and continued to kiss down until I got to her clit. I gave it a small lick . Her hips bucked in response. She was so sensitive. I kissed her clit softly over and over again. She was moaning and slowing grinding on my face.

I started to really eat her out. I licked and sucked her clit with the softest pressure she opened her legs wider and grabbed the back of my head . Before I could move her hands Brian grabbed them from the top and pinned them over her head. I kept the same pressure. Driving her crazy. Brian kissed her swallowing up her moans. She whimpered and grinder her clit against my tongue. I put both hands on her stomach and took her entire clit in my mouth and sucked. She tore away from Brian’s mouth and looked at me struggling against Brian’s grasp. He grabbed her throat and righted his grip on her wrist. He whispered words of encouragement. “Look how beautiful
She is eating your pussy.” Iris nods completely submissive. “Look in her eyes while she makes you cum”

We locked eyes. Her body was completely under my control. I sucked her essence until she came. She came while we restrained her and it was so hot. I was dripping wet. “Good girls”

Briann came behind me. I could feel his dick against my pussy. Clean her up he said. Iris licked my neck and face clean. She kissed me softly. My lips and neck. She kissed and sucked at my nipples. Brian rubbed his hard dick at my pussy entrance, teasing me. He grabbed me by the ass cheeks squeezing and slapping.

His teasing felt good. My nipples in Iris mouth felt good I was in heaven.”this what you want?” He growled.

I moaned and arched more. He was still clothed behind me while Iris was naked in front.

He entered me from behind his whole length in one stroke.

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/11inw9d/new_to_writing