Hey all, so I recently got into writing erotica. I’m no writer by any means. I just wanted to put my thoughts or rather my fantasies into words and see if it’s any good. So I’m kinda keen to know if this small scene that i wrote is of any good or not. You can let me know what you think of it. Thanks! Oh also if you write as well, maybe we could grab a cup of virtual coffee and write something together? :p
I was finally heading to Scotland. To meet the girl I’d been aching to see. My flight touched down around 7 in the evening. Went through all the regular formalities of getting out of the airport. All this while I was so restless. Just waiting to see her. It had been almost a year of just between getting to know her and constant sexts. So the excitement was just pouring out. And that’s when I see her. She looked striking. The previous day we had decided on what she would be wearing. A light pink top and a very short grey skirt. No panties no bra. I get out, give her the biggest hug ever and a small peck on her lips. Lots more was going to follow.
We get in her car and head towards her place, catching up on things on the way. But we knew what we really wanted. It was around 10pm and raining as we entered her driveway. She had a beautiful cozy little house in a very nice neighborhood. She stopped the car half way and looked at me. She gave me that , ” I’m here, I’m yours, take me right here right now” kinda look. She was right in front of me now and I was completely frozen. Where do I start? My mind was rushing through thoughts and it suddenly stopped. I felt her lips on mine. Everything was a blur. Her lips felt so delicate and soft. I kissed back, lightly tugging at her lip. She then slowly reached for my hand and put it on her thighs. I knew what I wanted. My body started to wake up now. I slid my hand slowly between her thighs, dragging my nails along. We stopped kissing as both of our breaths started getting intense. Our foreheads resting against each other, I reached for her pussy. Wet was an understatement. She was drenched. As I ran my finger over her smooth sticky lips her whole body just quivered. I pulled my hand out and tasted her. Exquisite. I got out of the car, walked over to her side, opened the door, helped her out, and immediately lifted her up to the roof of the car. One leg on my shoulder and the other resting on the open door, I just dived for her pussy. I couldn’t resist the urge any longer. One arm on her ass cheeks, the other holding her leg, I feasted on her pink wet folds. Her pussy was so succulent, juicy, and tender. We were getting drenched in the rain but none of that mattered. I sucked and pulled at her clit making her moan out loud. I dipped my tongue in and out of moist pink sleeves. I was a glutton for her pussy.
I reached for her nipples, squeezing them hard. I didn’t give her even a moment’s breath to collect herself, cause all i wanted to do at that moment was devour her biblically delicious pussy. Then I turned her around, dropped my pants down half way, and just slowly sat down on the cold wet pavement, my back resting against the car. I wanted to fuck her right there. I slowly pulled her down on me, and our bodies fit in perfectly, like two parts meant for each other. My throbbing cock locked inside her tight little pussy. We both hug eachother and sit there for a moment, just gazing into each others eyes. Lost in the moment, We just start fucking madly, tangled in each other’s braces. I just wanted to hold her tight and fuck her and never stop. I clenched her hair tight and bit her nipples every time I felt her pussy squeeze my cock hard. In that cold night, in the rain, her pussy felt so warm it was beyond perfect. I lifted her up and decided to move in. I keep ploughing into her as we made our way to the door. She opens it, we walk in, still fucking. Her house was beautiful. Small but cozy. She had a fireplace, which was already lit. I laid her down next to it. We were just drenched, panting and so much in love. We took our clothes off and got completely naked. I lifted her legs up, and opened em wide. I lapped her pussy, nuzzling my face between her quivering thighs. She tried to squirm around and get away as it was too much for her to handle, but no way was i gonna let that stop me. I force two fingers up her clenched ass and pull her back into me. This made her scream in pleasure and she was just losing it. She was never eaten out like this. Everything i was doing felt instinctual. Raw. I lost count of how many times I made her cum. All I focused on was making love to her. After what was possible a few hours of ravaging her pussy, I lay next to her. We both stared at eachother. She looked so fucking hot. The girl I’ve been desiring for so long, laying next to me. She looked out of breath from the number of times I made her cum. With one leg of hers over my hips, and the other between my legs, I slowly guided my cock into her pussy. Immediately her pussy greeted my cock with a tight squeeze. We just lay there, kissing. I kissed her till she was relaxed. I held her close to me, clinging to her tightly and started to push my cock deeper. With her head resting against my chest, and my arms tight around her, I started to fuck her harder. Her moans made me fuck her faster and more intense. She started licking my neck my chin, we go back to making out so passionately. She looked at me with hungry eyes, moaning ” Take me!…Take me..fuck me like I’m your little slut!!..make me yours!!!..” That’s when I lose it. I fuck her like there’s no tomorrow. She starts moaning and screaming and writhing in pleasure as I fuck her so uncontrollably.
Both of us lost in eachother. It was sex like never before. Two people couldn’t have wanted each other more. Two people couldn’t have made love and fucked each other any more passionately than we were. She couldn’t hold it any more. I couldn’t either. She hugged me so tight. I embraced her tighter. We hugged so tight we ourselves could barely breathe. All that lust, all that love, all that pent up feeling of making her mine, just exploded between us. We both started to cum so madly, it was unreal. At this point, i cannot find words in my vocabulary to describe that moment. The way we felt and the way we fucked… beyond spectacular. I end up cumming so fucking hard over and over again inside her. And she cums so madly on me. Both of us , panting and moaning, still hugging each other as tight as ever. Our bodies still fucking frenzily. ” I wanna cum again” she moaned. At this point I only knew one thing. TO NOT STOP FUCKING HER. We kept going. I was just lost in feelings. We fucked and fucked and fucked until she came again, squeezing every drop of my cum off my cock. I loved her so much to not let go. We kept going. The soreness in my cock was overshadowed by how fucking good she kept riding me. We were on a fuck filled frenzy, kissing and licking and moaning and just orgasms after orgasms after orgasms. I never wanted it to end…
It was nearly 10 am when I woke up. She had passed out on me, still hugging me. I lay back down.
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/11aovtu/that_one_amazing_night