Let’s say you’re writing a scene and person A is smothering person B with their ass.
Person B is still talking, but it’s muffled. For the sake of the scenario, let’s say they’re begging for more.
In the comments, please show me examples of what B’s dialogue could look like.
I appreciate any participation and suggestions/advice, thank you!
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/10pocf8/assistance_required
“MORphh!” “Gibff ME MffRE”
I would go with an inner dialogue, otherwise it might sound silly.
I couldn’t help but grab her by the waist and pull her tight round ass even harder onto my face. I wanted to tell her to ride me harder and use me as she pleases, but I couldn’t form words against her bucking onto my mouth. I continued sucking at her clit with each wave, offering my tongue up for her… I begged her to cum, but I don’t think the words made it out anymore than messy moans.