The sexy woman was at a bar in New York on a rainy day, sexually smoking a cigarette. I walked up to her and said “hey sexy, wanna go bang at my place?” To which she quickly replied “yeah I want to go to your place and bang!” So we decided to go to my place and bang
We walked into my bedroom and the sexy woman threw her sexy dress out the window and began to strip me, the sexy woman started with my shirt, it was a black leather jacket. The stench of sweat reached around her as she took of my black leather jacket. She then proceeded to take of my leather biking boots and leather pants.
She then said “you look so sexy” to which I said “I know”
that’s when we got down and dirty, I took off her sexy bra and sexy underwear and proceeded to incert my dick into her sexy vagina. She moaned sexually. She loved my dick. Her boobies were bouncing like bouncy balls as I pounded her for all she was worth. I took my dick out of her sexy pussy hole and told her “suck my horny ding dong” to which she said “only if you promise to do whatever I say when I finishing sucking” to which I replied “oh yeah baby”
She grabbed my dick with her sexy hands and gave me the sexyist blow job I had ever got.
The end
This is my first story, tell me what to improve, I hope you found it as sexy as I did. If you want to here more of the sexy woman tell me in the comments.
Source: reddit.com/r/sexystories/comments/6vluxf/the_sexy_woman_mf
I mean, you didn’t specifically ask for notes, but you did invite us to tell you stuff in the comments, so I feel relatively confident in telling you that to be quite honest, you repeat yourself too much.
I mean, as a first-order fix, at least look for places where you can replace ‘sexy’ with ‘sexily’, and see if that improves things.
Also, you know, be a little more descriptive, I guess, but if you feel like it, whatever.
Something to consider.