Make Me Forget My Name

These characters are in their 20s.
Any and all criticism is welcome!

She looked up at him with her brown, doe eyes. A grin drew across her face. Her fingers came to the center of his chest and she eyed him up and down. Descending to her knees, her hand dragged along to the button and zipper on his jeans. Rubbing his member through his pants, she continued looking up at him. “You like that?” she asked, seductively. He let out a shaky breath. She brought his jeans to his ankles, leaving only his boxers to cover him at half-mast. Her eyes widened, and she brought his boxers down too. Her left hand rested on his right thigh, and her right hand moved into her sweatpants. She kissed him at the base, and kept smooching up to his head while rubbing her fingers against her panties. Saliva filled her mouth, and arousal fluid filled her vagina. “Here’s what I want you to do: I want you to grab my head, and ravage my face. I want to feel you in the back of my throat. I want you to fuck me silly until I can’t remember my own name.” He giggled and said to her “you know I love it when you talk sexy,” he rested his hands on the upper back of her head, “but I think you can do a lot more with no words at all.” With one swift movement, he thrusted himself inside of her. His cock filled her mouth, and her smile grew even bigger. Her hand slithered through her panties and she started fingering her pussy. Pushing and pulling, his long cock slid in and out of her throat. She rubbed her clit faster and faster, moaning as his speed increased as well. Her heartbeat rapidly grew, as adrenaline filled her veins. They looked each other in the eye, his grip tightened, her eyes widened, he turned her and shoved her into the wall (don’t worry, it didn’t hurt). Her face burned as she got closer to orgasm. Hitting a sweet spot, he began to moan uncontrollably. Her eyes rolled to the back of her head. She arched her back, pushing her pussy towards him as she came. His whole body pressed up against her, fully embracing her as he came. Cum poured into her throat, and he was breathing heavily. Pulling out of her, his swollen cock dripped with semen and saliva. She gulped, and took in a deep breath herself. He sat next to her. He asked “Got a name?” She chuckled and said “Not sure, thanks to you.”

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/sss6n5/make_me_forget_my_name