These characters are in their 20’s.
Any and all criticism is welcome.
Coming from behind, he moved his arms around her and pulled her in tightly. She felt every movement as his hands traveled gently down her body. Loose, light grey sweatpants were draped over her hips, hanging on by a haphazardly tied knot. He untied the strings holding up her pants and they plummeted to her ankles. She felt a breeze from the vent blow across her legs. His right hand lay on her thigh and his left hand sat cupped around her hip. Playing with her anticipation, he slowly dragged his hand from her thigh to her groin. This was the first time that’ll he was taking charge, and they were both excited by it. They had known each other for a long time, and knew how to make the other feel good. It was through their connection that she knew exactly what he was waiting for. Breaking the silence filled only by the white noise of the vent, she said yes, and he slipped his fingers inside her. She squeaked. His index and middle finger explored the opening to her vagina. She let out a hot breath as he circled inside her. With his other hand, he went from her hip to under her t-shirt. He gently fondled her breast. He rubbed her clit faster and faster. She leaned back into him and said in a breathy voice “Up! Up!”. He angled his fingers upward and she moaned. “Don’t stop!” She was so close now that he put his foot back to brace himself. She came hard and melted in his hands, but he wasn’t done with her yet. He rubbed up against her backside, until his own sweatpants came down around his ankles. He loved it when she felt good. The sounds she made filled his thoughts. She felt him position himself in between her legs. She looked up at him and said “Yes, please”. He removed his fingers and slid inside. “Ooooooh. I can feel you.” His cock stretched as far as it could to reach deep inside her. Blood rushed to her groin and her pussy swelled with excitement. He quietly moaned and let out a breathy “Holy…” before composing himself. He began to move in and out of her. His pace increased before he got into a rhythm. Regaining some footing, she leaned into him more. She drove him crazy with her sounds. Her moans, her breathy words of affirmation, he loved every syllable of it. He took this opportunity to pull her hair back and kiss her passionately, muffling her words. He moved his arms to embrace her with one and rub her clit with the other. He relentlessly increased his speed. The minty smell of their toothpaste filled their headspace. She was having trouble forming words, but was able to get out “I’m… gon… na… cum… a… gain…” which excited him even more. Her moans crescendoed and she pushed harder towards him until her whole body convulsed with ecstasy. Her pussy gushed as he overstimulated her. He hugged her tightly and got as close to her as he could as he exploded inside her. They yelled with pleasure and fell to the floor. His cock pulsated as semen poured inside her. With a slurred speech, she said “I can feel you shooting inside me. It’s so warm.” He softened up as their breathing lightened. She faced him and they both smiled. He cupped his hands around the back of her head and said “I love you” and kissed her. She giggled. “I love you too.”
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/srvai2/putty_in_his_hands_mf