First Time Writing. Constructive Comments Please.
It was a beautiful Spring Day, I had finally realized as I was driving down the road. Things had been pretty tough lately. As I pulled into my driveway I was surprised to see a pickup truck sitting there. I then remembered that my buddy Chris promised to come by and finish working on my new deck. The deck was costing me quite a bit of money so I was very happy that he was able to come by and finish the work.
I was anxious to see the progress he had made so I decided to go around to the back of the house and check out his work. From the back lawn the deck looked great, I was pleased. I started to climb the new stairs that he installed and see the top portion, as I slowly climbed the stairs admiring the quality of his work, I started to hear what sounded like low distant moans. I stopped and looked around just in case there was an injured animal. I saw nothing and resumed my way to the top.
I made my way to the fifth step from the top and the moans began again. I slowly looked over the top of stairs in case an injured animal was sitting there on the floorboards. I was in no mood to get pounced on by a rabid animal, it was way too nice outside. I looked over the top of the stairs and realized why I was hearing these strange sounds. The two French doors leading into the house were wide open and there was Chris, leaning against the dining room wall and my lovely wife Maria was sucking his cock.
I could not believe my eyes and what was happening. Maria was sitting there, on her gardening stool with just her work shorts on. Her right hand had a grip on the base of Chris’ cock from what I could see, and there she was, sliding her gorgeous full lips up and down his shaft. Her beautiful firm tits were bouncing a little every time she moved her head up and down.
I began to have mixed emotions once I saw Maria’s head go up and down on his cock. Was I supposed to confront them and stop this? Were Maria and I going to get a divorce after 20 years? Should I just walk away like nothing ever happened? No, there was one thing I had not counted on, deep down inside, I wanted to watch the pair of them together. I had never seen anything like this, other than in movies. I think seeing Maria with another guy’s cock in her mouth turned me on like nothing has in the recent past. I was still trying to understand my curiosity and thought of reasons why I should let the two of them continue. From what I saw, Maria seemed very into the entire scene. Did she need a thrill with a younger guy? Chris was easily 15 years younger than her; he was in excellent shape, and he was sporting a nice size cock with a great big head on it. I was even impressed with his shape and his exceptional equipment. And yet, who am I to deny her this? I love her.
After my initial shock, Maria stole my attention again as she continued her mission to please him. Chris seemed very at ease as he leaned against the wall moaning as Maria continued to swallow him deep into her throat. She would start by teasing his big purple head with her tongue and then wrap her full lips around it and swallow it down again. There was no question that he was hitting the back of her mouth, he would stop moaning and let out a subdued “ahhhhh” when he was there. I was already hard but when I saw her lips swallow that head and slide down his staff, I felt as if I would explode from my own excitement. Maria was not letting up on his cock, it seemed to me as if this was her purpose in life right then. She started to bob up and down on him even faster. I could see that she was taking all of him in, as she stopped just short of her hand holding it. He was big and I noticed saliva leaking out of the corner of her mouth and then fall down to her big firm tits.
I must admit, I was impressed by his size and how she was able to blow him. Sometimes, after we had sex, we would talk about each other’s past sexual experiences. I had a few good ones that surprised Maria, but she was something else in her heyday. Her college and high school days put mine to shame. She just loved to have a guy inside her pumping away till she was screaming and then he would fill her tight pussy with his load. She always said the more the guys came in her, the happier she was. But her blowjob history seemed to be matched by no one. She was quite proud of the number of guys she blew while in school. From what she told me; she would suck a guys dick anywhere anytime. I loved what she described as her favorite part, she just loved how the guys would take over before they came and then fill her mouth as much as possible with their loads. These late nights and sharing would result in some fantastic sex.
Chris was really moaning by now and started to pump his hips and cock into her mouth. As he leaned against the wall, his left hand made it down to the back of Marias’s head, he grabbed her hair, pulled her head back and off his cock. As her head went back, I could see her mouth seductively open, her cheeks flushed from sucking and her eyes slightly closed. She was beautiful, it was all clear, her existence right then was to please him and give herself to sucking. I could see this in her eyes, deep down I agreed with her and what she had to do.
I am not sure who made the next move between them. Did he pull her mouth onto him or did she move forward to continue pleasing him? I think she dove back down onto him, she needed him in her mouth. As Maria continued to suck Chris, he let out a huge moan and both his hands slid onto her head. Chris started to pump quicker into her mouth. Maria’s hand continued to hold his cock like before and her left arm dropped down between her legs. As Chris pumped, Marias free hand found its way through her shorts and began to massage her clit. It had to have felt great for her because once her fingers disappeared and found their way, she shuddered a little as if being shocked.
As Chris was pumping into her mouth his moans were getting quicker and yet, all the while you could hear sucking and swishing noises from Maria’s mouth. The scene was fabulous to witness. I think my own balls disappeared into me getting ready to come once I heard her like this. I had heard the sounds before but seeing and hearing her make them with another man’s cock in her mouth was such a turn on. I will never forget what happened next. Chris starts to furiously pump his cock in and out of her mouth, he tells her not to stop and don’t let go, I swear I almost came then. He is holding Maria’s head, thrusting into her mouth and I swear she is being suffocated by the sounds she is making and his huge cock. But no, she is doing as she is told and just keeps sucking and holding onto his dick. She has to be feeling good as her hand is still moving in her shorts and rubbing her clit.
Chris lets out a loud deep grunt and holds Maria’s head while he sinks his cock as far as possible down her throat. I can’t believe how much of his cock she can swallow, she continues to impress me more and more. I am a little humiliated by the size of his dick but I have never seen her perform like this. By the way he sounded and his grip on her head, I know he is about to fill her mouth and throat with an outstanding load. I can only imagine the size and force of his load from the way she has been sucking him and the way he has been fucking her throat, plus he is a much younger guy. His grip on her head seems to get tighter as he feels his come being released from the tip of his dick in those exquisite bursts. My cock is rock hard as I watch my wife suck this guy’s dick. I can’t believe how she starts to swallow him down as he comes with that size dick in her mouth. It amazes me how she is doing this, I am quite proud of her.
Maria is not done just yet, Chris is still coming and she still has him in her mouth. As she holds his dick she suddenly starts to shudder. She drops forward off her little stool onto her knees still feeling her own orgasm, she leans her right shoulder on Chris, with his dick in her mouth all the time. She releases his dick from her mouth, her mouth continues to stay slightly open and she opens her eyes slowly. As her eyes open, she can see me watching her, when our eyes lock, my cock explodes and I smile at her.
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/sn27zy/deck_is_finished
Good story. But what happens next??? Can’t wait for more of yr stories.
Fantastic build up. I think both of their finishes could have been more detailed for all of that build up. I liked the way it finshed, and excited to read more if there is another part.