“ok avery you’ve got this” she said to herself looking into the mirror. Avery was preparing for her blind date in 30 minutes. Her sex life had been stagnant since her long term boyfriend had left her a year ago and she hadn’t been with a man since, she hadn’t really been with him much either in all the years they had dated they had only had sex three times. Finally her friend from work had goaded her into a blind date with someone she knew.
She was nervous as could be she had gone all out to prepare for this date. She had gone to the salon, went shopping for a dress, put on her nicest jewelry, everything to make a good impression. She was in a dark red silk dress that clung tight to her ample breast with a deep v going down in between her breasts fitting tight to her flat abs and flaring out with her ample ass, toned from years of squats, the fabric flowed down her beautiful long legs paired with red high heels. She was wearing a pearl necklace that ppaired nicely with her tan skin and blonde hair that reached down to her lower back. She picked up her phone and sent a text to her date, the only thing she knew about him was that his name was ayden “look or me I’ll be the tall girl in the red dress”
She left her rundown apartment and got into her 1995 towncar and headed to the restaurant they had agreed to go to, giamatti’s Italian kitchen, fine dining for a fine lady. She arrived early by about five minutes. Nervous and excited she wondered what type of man her date was, was he a tall suave businessman or maybe an artist! She had always had a soft spot for painters. In truth she was already a little wet at the prospect of seeing a man, she had always felt weird playing with herself and couldn’t do it and her drought was really weighing down on her mentally it was always so hard being 6’2 finding the right guy was a chore. The clock reached 7 and her date hadn’t arrived yet. She looked around the room and only saw an older couple in the corner. The door opened and she excitedly looked with her crystal smile that makes any man in the vicinity have a heart flutter, and then her face dropped. It couldn’t be him. It was a 5’6 120 pound man. He had a bad spout of acne on his face filled with white heads wearing cargo pants and a phedora. But to her dismay he laid eyes on her and smiled real wide with a goofy grin and walked over “hey avery right! Im ayden!” Avery mumbled a response already seething in her mind at Kathy for insulting her with this obvious virgin. He took a seat across the table and asked the waiter for a mountain dew. Avery promptly ordered an entire bottle of wine, to get through this dinner.
Ayden droned on and on about his video games and his katana collection as avery offered curt replies to the pimply manchild downing glass after glass of wine. Avery, 3/4th of the way through the bottle simply picked up the bottle and downed the rest. She looked up at him, still wearing that god awful phedora. She weighed her options on her mind on one hand she had no way of getting home drunk as she was and on the other she sure as hell wasn’t going to his house after. She came to a decision. She leaned forward her long beautiful blonde hair draping over the table and the cloth around her breasts falling forward giving a hint of what was underneath. “If you drive me home ill let you see my tits.”. pimpleton as she was now calling him in her head jolted and knocked over his glass of mountain dew. “ Absolutely!” Avery stood up shakily and meandered out of the restaurant, unsteady on her high heels. Pimpleton rushed out of the restaurant excited for his first pair of tits. She opened the door and had a controlled fall onto the bench seat up front as pimpleton turned the car on. Her head was laying ever close to his lap and she decided to tease him a bit as he drove her home. She brushed her hair to the side and brought her beautiful face and lay it sideways across his lap her mouth breathing drunkenly overy the spot on his lap where his cock lay. Her refined pink lips could feel the tip of his cock harden like a rock. She didn’t go any further the thought of touching the cock of a weakling like him discugusted her. The car pulled into her parking spot and she lazily got up took off her dress right in front of him she revealed her pink nipples on her perfect tits and her red thong. Pimpleton’s jaw dropped and he started unzipping his pants but all avery did was ask for the keys take off her heels and get out of the car. Pimpleton jumped out of the car. *click* the car door locked. “walk home” avery said and walked into her apartment. The pitiful pimpletons face dropped and he slowly walked off. Avery stumbled into her room and put on her bedtime tanktop that clung to her body and fell on her bed and looked up at the ceiling
“ god damnit god damnit god damnit!” “That fucking bitch” she expelled a stream of curses. Home at Friday night at 9 pm just as boring as her life had been for the past year, nothing had changed. Her face soured and she sulked for 2 hours stairing at the ceiling sobering up. “ I guess I’ll go for a drive” she muttered to no one in particular and got out of bed still in her red thong and tank top and wandered out the door and got in her car. Avery often went for drives when she was upset and it had taken a toll on her gas tank and her wallet.
She drove and drove , all her fantasizing earlier had gotten her horny and she had no release. She pulled into a parking lot leaned back and looked at the ceiling. she wanted to be used she wanted someone to take control she was tired of sobeing the lead she stayed that way for awhile before sitting up she looked in front of her and saw a rundown dive bar with half the lightbulbs working and had a thought. She looked in her back seat and saw her dry erase board and marker and smiled as she scribbled on the board. She opened her car door and stepped out of the car.
Her bare slightly pink feet on the pavement, her thong going right up between her firm cheeks dripping with juices and her white tanktop riding halfway up her abs marker and board in her hand. she walked into the dive bar. Every mans eye’s were on her and men started hooting and hollering. Yet she didn’t look at them. She walked towards the men’s bathroom and paused at the threshold bent over hands on her knees and a man spanked her ass. Her heart was pumping so loudly she thought it would explode, she was confident until this point she was so nervous she was shaking and her mind was racing “is this a good idea” “I know I want excitement in my life but This is….” But that tiny voice in the back of her head egged her on and pushed her through that door heart thumping she walked into the bathroom and for now no one followed. Her hands shaking and her legs wobbling she couldn’t believe she was doing this. This is crazy. Her nervous hands tried to prop up the sign but it kept falling over and over again but eventually she got it to stick. It said.
Rule 1: must use a condom.
Rule 2: my panties must stay on.
Rule 3: after cumming put a tally mark on my lower back.
Happy fucking<3
She walked towards the dirty toilet and her stomach lurched but her heart beat even faster and her pussy got wetter. The exhilaration! This was the craziest thing she had ever done but all it did was make her wetter the more she thought about it. . It had piss all over the seat. Drunken men can’t aim as it turns out. She straddled in front of the toilet her unblemished pink feet touching sticky yellow stains on the lenolium floor. She placed her hands on the backside of the toilet tank and her long straight hair drooped down onto the dirty floor still speckled with drops from whoever was in the bathroom before.
It wasn’t long until the first inquisitive man walked in. Avery’s arms started weakening as she heard his footsteps growing closer and her abs started quaking. The footsteps grew closer and then stopped. Followed by a gruff laugh. Avery’s breathing became loud and erratic. *click* The sound of a belt buckle hitting the floor followed by the soft sound of falling cloth. She felt it. a warm soft fleshy cock slapped between her butt landing right between her thigh gap. She gasped, her senses heightened to the peak. She couldn’t see the man behind her but she could hear his breathing. The man took a halfstep forward pushing his cock right against her. She let out a soft moan as she felt the cloth between his cock and her private regions press into her as she felt his once soft member harden and could feel the sides of his cock on her labia covering it in her juices. he hadn’t put a condom on yet but that just made her even wetter. That was what she wanted from the start in all honesty she had to set rules to have them be broken by a real man. It excited her, a man that treated her like meat.
The door opened again followed by multiple pairs of footsteps. The man behind her yelled out “wait your goddamn turn!”. A chorus of voices replied, “bullshit” “she got more than one hole don’t she!” the men all quieted as they read the sign. Heavy footsteps followed and the man pressing into her backed up away from her. In truth avery was a bit scared, she had no control and that delighted her. She could be taken away and used as a whore for weeks but that thought only made her more sure she wanted to do this. If that happened she thought. “If my beautiful body toned from years of working out were taken and I was made to service at their discretion…. That might be just delightful” she fantasized about.. A large Hand grasped at her hair and pulled her back, half holding her weight up as her legs buckled and a jolt ran down her back. “ we don’t like wearing condoms” said a giant man that must weigh 280 pounds with a beard that puts paul bunyun to shame. “ yes, sir please cum in me sir” avery’s shakey voice replied her horny primal side peeked out of her and all she wanted was to be used.
The goliath of a man sat down on his porcelain throne and pulled out his equally large member. At least 10 inches long and the width of avery’s arm she gulped and slowly shuffled her feet across the sticky floor thinking only about how much that cock will hurt if he actually fucked her. She knelt down on the floor taking quick nervous breaths she leaned forward and pressed her pink dainty lips against the tip of his cock slowly opened her mouth sliding down his cock her tongue licked around his cock in her mouth and she started working her mouth up and down his shaft as she worshiped his cock. She worked his tip faster and faster switching between sucking on his balls and blowing him. She was almost being suffocated by his cock. Her gag reflex was firing but anytime she tried to come up he would push her back down again. He took a handful of her hair and roughly pulled her off his cock a sliver of drool falling out of averys mouth with tears from gagging rolling down her face but a smile that reached all the way to the eyes. All she wanted was to please. He threw her to the ground and she slid a couple feet. She felt an immense pressure weighing down on her from behind squeezing her ass and playing with it.
She felt his heavy belaboured breathing on her neck and a sharp pull stretching the fibers of her panties just before the point of breaking. Pain and pleasure wrapped all in one giant package she felt her pussy struggle to allow for the size of his cock and her ass shaking after his deep plunge. Every part of her was shaking racked with continuous orgasm she moaned. He sped up faster and faster. She felt her pussy retract and expand over and over again as his hand pushed her face into the floor smushing her tits. Avery yelled a stream of obscenities at no one in particular. Pound pound pound unrelentless the man shook her body with every storke speeding up until with 3 massive thrusts he came deep in her womb and with a plop he pulled his dick out of her gaping pussy unable to close after the treatment it had just received. She lay there exhausted, panting, hair spread out all over the floor legs splayed out with a throbbing pussy unable to move until the man made one long tally all the way from her back dimple to the underside of her ass. The man went to pull his pants up but then stopped. Warm. A yellow liquid was splashing onto her butt flowing down over her pussy as he moved the stream up hitting her hair. ”now y’all can have her” the man said and walked out of the bathroom. “dick” the the men all said. “ fuck now I don’t even really want to fuck her.” one of the men said. “shit man suit yourself” Avery felt herself grabbed by the ankles and pulled up into the downward dog position from yoga. Another man walked around to her front sat down grabbed her head and forced his cock down her throat. The man behind her pulled her now only loosely attached panties to the side and took his cock to the only untouched place on her body. Her ass. All those years of squats had made her ass so strong she was able to hold it shut. If a man wasn’t strong enough to get there he didn’t deserve it she thought. “ fucking let me get in there bitch” But avery continued sucking cock and didn’t reply. “fine then” the man said he stuck his cock into her now loose pussy making a plop sound everytime he pulled out. The man in her mouth pulled her off his dick and came all over her model face. The other man fucked her pussy relentlessly trying to find any tightness but couldn’t eventually he jerked himself off onto her pussy covering her lips in sticky white that stained her red panties. The two men followed the firsts lead and put their tallies on her ass almost as a way of claiming it. the one who had tried to fuck her ass was mad though. And that flipped her switch even more. He pulled her over to the toilet seat back resting against the seat, avery panted heavily. The man unzipped his pants and let out a stream of humiliating piss all over her tanktop staining it yellow.
The other men disgusted with her current state simply gave her a quick fucking one at a time leaving her pussy a sloppy mess. She begged them for more but all she received was being spat on. Eventually the bathroom was filled with only herself. Cum dripping from her used pussy and covered in piss she gathered her things and stumbled out of the bathroom thong loosely hanging down giving a full sight of her pussy. The few women in the bar sneered in disgust as she shuffled to her car followed by a thin long stream of semen all the way to the floor.
Avery was exhausted, she was too tired even to drive. Now Pitiful and rejected by all the men in the bar in her ruined state she picked up her phone.
“come get me from spike’s billards and drinks I want you to see my aquarium”
Pimpleton immediately replied “On my way M’lady” God damnit she thought to herself “this fuck is pitiful but I don’t know any other men and I cant have a woman drive me.” In a little while pimpleton pulled up in his Pontiac aztek and she stumbled into his car and promptly fell asleep before saying a word. Pimpleton wrinkled his nose she reeked of piss and sex but she was still the prettiest girl he had ever talked to. He looked at her sleeping face and noticed the cum drying over her cheeks and nose and his cock grew hard. “eyes on the road” he reminded his self And continued on to her apartment about 45 minutes away. Luckily she had given him the address earlier or he probably would have been completely lost.
He pulled into her apartment complex for the second time that night and put his car in park. He walked around to her seat and tried to pick her up. He had always wanted to pick up a girl like people do in the movies. However his pitiful arms couldn’t do it and he had to wake her up to have her walk inside. She slowly opened her eyes annoyed to see his face but rejuvenated a bit from her nap. She grabbed him by the wrist and led him inside. “oh yay oh yay im totally getting laid this is the jackpot. “ pimpleton thought to himself she led him into her bedroom and shut the door.
She sat down onto the bed and spread her legs. Her panties were drooping off to the side cum was still leaking out and piss was drying around her pussy. “ eat it” she commanded. “ what? I want to fuck you” he replied. “fucking do as I say worm I may be gross but I am still above you.” She was exhilarated. She had been the bottom rung and she had enjoyed it. it was the greatest thing she had ever experienced but she was a bit conflicted. She had to prove to herself that she wasn’t pitiful. She had to redeem some of her ego. She had expected all the cum but the piss had shocked her, albeit she had enjoyed it in the moment. She placed her princess like hands on the back of his head and pushed him into her pussy she could hear him slurping up the semen out of her pussy. She reached down her hand and rubbed the cum and piss on her panties into his hair. She felt his tongue glide up and down her labia and sloppily licking at her clitoris she closed her eyes in bliss as he served her. She would only serve a strong man. She started shit talking him as he licked up the leavings of other men. Calling him a mongrel, a worm, a pussy. “A weakling like you can’t fuck me only a man who’s stronger than me gets to fuck me.” Pimpleton pulled away. “ what the fuck! I have to be stronger than you to be allowed to fuck you? What the fuck! Fuck it ill take you right here
Avery Loses
Pimpleton lunged at her. What avery didn’t take into account was the toll being fucked so brutally earlier had taken on her body. After only a few desperate attempts pimpleton had her beautiful broken body pinned down beneath him. “DO YOU SUBMIT!’’ Avery was blushing she felt his hands pressing down on her shoulders and his knee pinning down her naked body. She felt humiliated but at the same time had found her place all the way at the bottom of the totem pole. “I submit…” pimpleton flipped her over and looked at her pitiful pussy sloppy with cum and decided he would go for her other hole. Weakened from the poundings of 10 different men her ass only gave up a token resistance. He pressed her face into the pillow and moved his pitiful 4 inch cock into position he placed the head right on her puckered asshole and with a thrust penetrated through her tight asshole feeling his cock where no cock had been before. Orgasm after orgasm went through her body. Earlier it had been caused by being dominated by a giant man stronger than any other. But now it was because she knew. She was at the bottom. She was this pitiful mans sex toy and he would practice his depraved desires on her. She was humiliated. But deep down she was the happiest she had ever been as he spurt his cum in her tight hole. He pushed her down his pasty chest and put his flaccid cock in her mouth and made her sleep that way like the slut she is.
Avery Wins.
Avery got tired of his clumsy oral servicing and threw him on his back. She reached her dainty hands down and grasped on to his balls. She wrapped her fingers around them and his unkept ball hair. “beg for mercy” she said with a demonic grin on her face. Pimpleton begged and whined for mercy but avery had been treated like shit and now it was her turn. She squeezed her hands like a vice grip watching his face contort in pain. His lips curled up and his eyes shut tight begging for mercy he cried out.
Avery slowly brought her face down close to his chest. Not touching him with her mouth but her erect nipples fell down and touched his lower abdomen. the Soft and supple feeling with ahard tip caused his dick to perk up hard. She breathed her warm moist breath down his chest moving lower. When her breasts hit his cock on her way down pimpletons face strained from the pain in his balls, not just because of her squeezing hand but also his semen building up in his balls turning them blue. Avery teased him a bit she opened her mouth and hovered over his cock breathing on it. she slowly lowered onto his cock. Avery put her mouth around his cock, pimpleton prepared for the warm sensation, but it didn’t come she kept her mouth open never touching his cock pimpleton tried to thrust his hips up to feel her mouth but she took her hand and pressed them down to the ground. She lifted up off his member and moved her mouth down to his balls. She put one of them in her mouth. Saggy balls with a sour smell. She slowly bit down into his balls causing him to howl with pain. She got an idea. Give him hope but keep it just out of reach. She took her mouth away from his balls leaving them with a wet sheen. She walked over to her dresser and pulled out a pair of light blue flannel pajama panties with a tiny pocket over her right butt cheek. She stepped into the panties and pulled them up.
“ok mongrel I’m gonna give you a chance at sticking your cock in my pussy. She walked over to her bathroom and put one foot on the toilet lid and one on the ground and grabbed onto the cabinet above her toilet. Causing the fabric of her panties to pull tight pressing into the gap over her pussy. “if you can fuck me through these oanties and break through the fabric you can fuck me and ill be your little servant. But if you lose you have to follow my every order for the rest of the year. Pimpleton enerjectically nodded his head and pulled up behind her, cock hard like a rock. Avery heard his energetic breathing and wondered why she had even made this bet. Something about the risk made her horny. She felt his cock press into her panties and her cheeks flushed red and her breathing accelerated, but these panties aren’t a thong. They are strong. Pimpleton gre exasperated at his lack of success the tip of his cock only getting wet from the semen of men earlier seeping out of her pussy. He thrusted faster and faster only pushing her panties in an inch. He grew exasperated and started begging for it to work. Avery started girating her hips letting his cock go up and down her ass. Faster and faster desperate to reach the promised land pimpleton thrust. Pimpleton moaned loudly and with a pitiful thrust he spurt loads of yellow cum onto her back and collapsed onto her. Avery flipped him over and placed his mouth over her pussy and fell asleep. Pleased that finally she had excitement in her life.
As always criticisms are always appreciated, sorry about the formatting it didn’t carry over from word and i don’t want to reformat 4000 words.
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/6hvmo3/averys_night_group_humiliation_anal_femdom
I love the story line but it seemed kinda rushed through. IMO