What the hell was that?

So I just sat down to write my first little short story that was just bouncing around in my head for a few days now. I did not control read it nor is English my first language and the reason I share it is that I know, that i will start to doubt it’s quality or what not when i reread it several times. :D i dont know it is just like that. I hope you enjoy it nonetheless and any feedback is welcome. Maybe I do more.

https://docdro.id/XXxS2ST

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticstories/comments/qw4ggo/what_the_hell_was_that