Naomi & Sitra: Blushing Brides [Fantasy Setting][F+F][Public Play][Dom/Sub]

This story is a little lengthy, 13,600 words, roughly 30 pages (that’s why I only have an excerpt here, with a link to the Doc page for the rest of it). So, it may be a time investment depending on how fast you read. Just as a heads up! The pace may also be a little slow for some’s tastes, as it’s not focused 100% on sex at all times.

It follows a pair of my characters, Naomi – a submissive Half-Dragon (basically a human girl with a dragon’s tail and horns), and Sitra – a dominant sorceress (I’m a nerd lol)

It doesn’t delve into any really, extreme kink territory, but it’s not really a “vanilla” type of story, either.

This is my first time making any of my real writing public, so I’d appreciate a gentle hand with criticisms. Without further adieu, I hope you enjoy!

Excerpt –

*The two girls had hardly escaped the sight of their guests before Sitra began a passionate, lustful assault on her new bride. While the party-goers, a mix of many from both women’s social circles, reveled in the festivities, the ruby haired sorceress whisked her lover away for their own, private celebration.*

*Naomi, as usual, was reluctant, but her more forward, confident partner wouldn’t take “no” for an answer, and she was hardly intent on letting the woman down on her wedding day. So, while their guests conversed, dined and danced in the courtyard, Sitra found a… somewhat… secluded area in the garden, to press her Half-Dragon partner against the wall, a terrace’s pillar.*

*The smaller of the two, who was currently on the receiving end of maddeningly delightful neck kisses, squirmed against her wife, her body shivering against the woman who restrained her. Sitra was by no means big, actually she was rather petite herself, but Naomi was smaller still, about a head shorter than the woman. If she really wanted to put an end to it, the ashen haired girl could likely match her lover’s force to make her stop, but she loved this treatment far too much to try that, and what’s more, she loved to indulge her partner’s desires, no matter the locale…*

Link to the full story – https://docs.google.com/document/d/14LFlcsCvdFqfw7QJyViKWXiIXu8IrbWNAuaCC1l3B80/edit?usp=sharing

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/r3tpvk/naomi_sitra_blushing_brides_fantasy