So I just sat down to write my first little short story that was just bouncing around in my head for a few days now. I did not control read it nor is English my first language and the reason I share it is that I know, that i will start to doubt it’s quality or what not when i reread it several times. :D i dont know it is just like that. I hope you enjoy it nonetheless and any feedback is welcome. Maybe I do more.
https://docdro.id/XXxS2ST
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/qw4hlr/what_the_hell_was_that
Where’s the rest of it? You need to continue it, not bad at all, as a matter of fact it’s good!