First Story. Would love feedback. PM's welcome.:)
It was one of those unlucky circumstances. My first day off of work in weeks was on the same day you had to work a double shift at the hospital. I knew this was day was horribly unfair to you. I decided I'd make it up to you once you got home around 9:30. After your long stressful day, you lazily walk through the door. The first thing you see is your favorite pair if pajama pants, your favorite shirt, which just so happens to be my old high school football shirt, and a new lacy black bra and matching panties. You smile at the fact that your boyfriend made the awkward trip into Victoria's Secret just for you. A note on top "Relax, babe. Take a nice long shower." After your shower, you head for our bedroom. As you walk through the apartment, the messy apartment you left this morning didn't seem to exist anymore. Everything was clean with a sparkle. When you make it to our bedroom, you find me on my laptop. Finishing up some school work. You sit at the foot of the bed. Still astonished at the clean apartment. I close my laptop and say with a proud smirk "You seem a bit happy for having just worked a double." You respond with "Well, I seem to have an amazing boyfriend." One small kiss placed on your lips. A moment taken to stare into your eyes. Followed by several deep passionate kisses. I cut you off before you can manage to wrap your arms around me. "How about you lay down? Like on your stomach." Confused by the request, you hesitantly follow orders. I climb on top. You feel my large, rough, warm hands slide underneath your shirt. "Let's make you more comfortable" as I slide your shirt off of you. I begin to rub your shoulders and arms as I ask how your day was. You talk about the difficult patients you dealt with and the latest gossip. Deep down, you know I'm not listening. You feel my hands travel lower down your body and my growing erection pressing against your firm ass. "What about your day?" My hands now massaging your ass. "It was awful. All day, I thought about you. How badly I needed you here. And you were stuck at work." My manhood now throbbing. I lean in to kiss your neck. Just having my muscular frame close to your body with my hips pressed into you gave you goosebumps. Without removing my lips from your neck, I undo your bra. Your heart is racing, your breaths are coming out in shudders, letting out small whimpers of pleasure. My kisses begin to travel down your back. I reach your supple ass and pull down your pants. You lift up your hips so I pull down your underwear too. Exposing your wet pussy. Kissing around your slit but not directly on it. Your legs visibly shaking from anticipation. You finally feel my tongue on your clit. Swirling and flicking until you feel you're on the edge of your climax. You let out a frustrated moan. You look back to see me removing my shirt. Showing my muscular body that you love so much. And pulling down my shorts. Finally letting my hard cock out. You feel the head of my cock press against your tight little cunt. But not enter. "You want this baby?" No words. Just an eager nod and your hands reach back to spread your pussy open for me. My fingers run along the outside of your dripping hole. "I don't think you want it bad enough." With the ecstasy running through your mind and quivers conquering your body, you can only say "Baby, please. I want it so bad." You feel me slowly slide every inch of my cock inside of you. Breathing in deeply. With my hands on your hips I pull out slow and gradually push myself back in. But the last two inches I slam into you. I keep this going just to tease you. I was patient for you to come home. Now, you'll be patient for me. Once you're nice and teased, I flip you over on your back. Throw your pants and underwear onto the ground and slide my cock back in. You wrap your legs around me and put your hands at the back of my neck. I slowly thrust in and out. "Want me to go faster?" "No. I NEED you to go faster." You kiss me and bite my lip. Then whisper "Come on. Fuck me" My hips pushing into yours faster and harder with each thrust. I see your eyes roll back. This is what you've been waiting for ever since you left the apartment this morning. You feel your body getting hotter, your breaths getting shorter, and your moans getting louder. Out of instinct, you go to bite my chest to quiet yourself. I stop you and tell you I want to hear you scream my name. I feel your toes curl behind my back and nails dig deeper in back. For added pleasure suck on your breast and lightly bite your already hard nipple. You finally scream "Oh my god, Tony! Yes!" My thrust slow down to allow your orgasm to settle. Your body tingling, your toes numb, and breathing settling back to normal. I lean in and kiss you. And with a sly smile "I'm not done yet" I flip you over and put you on all fours. I thrust my wet cock deep inside you. One hand on your shoulder and the other rubbing your dripping clit. I'm fucking you harder than before. Your ass bouncing against me. A good spank to your ass makes you want to cum again. You put your hands on the headboard to help push back on my cock. Your body feeling hot again. "Oh fuck, baby. I'm gonna cum again" you cry out. Once your body hits its climax again, you reach back and grab my hips. Pulling me in and keeping me there while you cry out my name in pure ecstasy. In the midst of all this, you get a crazy idea. You want to taste my cum. "Lay down" you say as assertive as you can. Immediately you take the head in your mouth and stroke my shaft. You can taste your own sweet juices. Running your tongue up and down my length. Making sure not miss a spot. You take as much of my long hard cock down your throat as you can. Hearing me moan, almost beg, for you to not stop makes you only want my cum even more. Shoving my cock down your throat repeatedly has got me on the edge. "Fuck I'm almost there baby. I wanna cum inside you." I beg. "Well, too bad because I wanna taste it." you say then lick the head. I lean my head back as you deepthroat my cock once again. You feel my hips buck a few times then long spurts of sweet cum shooting in your mouth. My moans turn into small shudders as you suck every last drop out. Making sure not to waste it, you swallow my cum with pleasure. You crawl up, kiss me, and lay next to me with your head on my sweaty chest. I pull the blanket over both if us. Both panting and in disbelief of the amazing sex we've just had. One more quick kiss followed by "I love you". The best way to unwind after your double shift.
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/2c7xsl/my_day_off_your_double_shift_first_story
Not bad, not bad at all. Female friendly with just the right amount of aggression and "dirty". Bravo.
Thanks.:) I hope you enjoyed it as much as I did writing it!;)
Don’t worry, I did. ;-)
Well, I’m thinking of writing more stories. I’d be more than willing to send you some rough drafts. I’d love to hear some opinions!:)
Sounds good to me. I’d love to give feedback. If you ever become famous, credit me for helping, ok? Lol
I doubt my stories are THAT good. But, if I do become famous, I’ll give you some credit!:)
Sweet, sounds good to me! I’ve been rather sexually charged lately and need some new reading material ;-)
Then, I’m your guy;)
Just avoid anal, scat, or golden showers and we’re peachy keen