If you haven’t read the female POV: [https://www.reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/qf8c6o/my_first_attempt_at_writing_erotica_and_looking/](https://www.reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/qf8c6o/my_first_attempt_at_writing_erotica_and_looking/)
Jane was an amazing young woman. This was our first date and it couldn’t have gone any better. I wasn’t sure what to expect meeting somebody in person for the first time who I had met through a dating app, but tonight was by far the best date I have ever been on. She was funny, exuberant, great at small talk, and made it feel like we had known each other for years. Add her unmatched beauty, and I couldn’t have asked for more. Unfortunately, our two-and-a-half-hour dinner date had to come to an end sooner or later. After spending such a wonderful evening with her, I was actually quite sad to be taking her back home. The fun continued on the drive back to drop her off at her apartment. I could tell the alcohol from dinner had made her quite a bit tipsy with the way she was giggling and joking with me. I was able to keep myself together until we pulled up in front of her apartment building.
Not ready for the evening to come to a close and seeing that she was getting more and more drunk as we were driving to her home, I asked her if she would need help walking up to her apartment. The words had barely made it out of my mouth by the time she agreed, almost like she was waiting for me to ask. I shut the car off and walked around to her side of the car to help her up, happy to be spending just a few more minutes with her. When I opened the door, she shifted abruptly toward me. Apparently, she had been using the door to help keep herself upright. I was able to quickly reach down to catch her before she slumped too far, and I helped her unbuckle and get up on her feet beside the car. As her flowing blonde hair slid back over her shoulders again, I could see that she was laughing about what had just happened in her drunkenness. Adding my laughter to hers, I helped her fumble her way down the sidewalk and up the single flight of stairs. Once we reached the top, she seemed to regain her footing a little bit and stumbled to her door on her own. I followed close behind just in case she began to lose her balance or footing.
The view from behind was just as incredible as the front. Even with her drunken gait, her slender hourglass shape looked perfect on her petite frame. That tight red dress caressed her body in all the right places and it made her perky bubble butt really pop, ending right at the bottom. Watching her perfect hips sway side to side as she walked down the hall sent a tingle from chest down to my groin. Her legs were stunning all the way down to the heels she was wearing. It’s a good thing she had found her footing, because I wasn’t so sure I could react quickly enough to catch her. My mind was elsewhere at the moment. In my tunnel vision focused solely on her waist, ass, and legs, I totally missed that we had already arrived at her front door and had to catch myself before I ran into her. Coincidentally, at that very same moment, she had dropped her keys. Trying to catch myself before I ran into her, she bent down hard at the waist and stumbled slightly backward into me. I reached down to grab her hips to make sure she didn’t fall, and she fell harder back into me. I felt a rage beginning to grow down below as she slowly stood back up, taking her time to pull her nice round ass back off of me. I couldn’t help but take another glimpse of the nice round ass that was now halfway revealed. Those firm butt cheeks looked so soft and smooth, separated by the slightest trace of a string that was only visible where it attached to the fabric covering her smooth mound.
She started giggling right away at how clumsy she was being and apologized for bumping into me. I chuckled and told her that it was okay, she’d had a lot to drink that night. She proceeded to unlock the door and turned back to me to ask if I could help her walk to her bed since she was obviously still a little unstable. Eager to keep the night going, I accepted without hesitation. I knew the second I left her apartment I would start missing her. I made my way through the door behind her and turned to close the door as she was setting down her purse and no sooner than I had the door closed, I felt something pressing against the front of my pants. That was when I realized her little episode with the keys just outside was not actually an accident. I stood there in disbelief, processing what was happening at the moment. Was this just the alcohol or something more? Should I just help her to her bed and not give in to her drunken sexual advances?
As I was trying to decide what to do, she just started pressing harder and swirling her hand all around, feeling me up intensely. I was beginning to get even more engorged and the fire was working its way up through me, taking over my thoughts and better judgment. As I slowly turned back to face her, I could see the lust in her face. I didn’t even know she had such a naughty side to her. All through dinner, she didn’t give any hints that she was so sexually forward and we hadn’t discussed it one time but this was a very nice surprise. I gently placed my hands on her perfect hips to grab a nice hold of her and slowly pulled her closer to me. She wouldn’t let go of the front of my pants, though. She just pressed harder, trying to gather as much detail as she could while she stumbled forward into me and bounced her lips off the right side of mine. We chuckled a little bit to ease the embarrassment and she wrapped her other arm around me to pull herself back in for another try. Our lips met this time and she tasted so sweet as our tongues flicked around and into each other’s mouth.
While our tongues were playing with each other, my hands worked their way up her shapely figure from her hips, along her petite waist, along her nice full breasts, stopping for a nice little scoop on the way up to her shoulders. Once my hands had reached their destination, I let out a slight flick from each one. Before I knew it, the straps to her dress slid off of her shoulders and the dress fell loosely to the floor. I could only imagine the view right in front of me while we were passionately making out with one another. I just couldn’t help but give her lip a little nibble from the excitement building in me. I felt her hands moving up to the buttons on my shirt and pulled back from the kiss so she could see what she was doing and I could finally see her perfect naked body standing in front of me. What a sight it was…her boobs looked even better than I had ever imagined. They were so round and full even without the added cleavage effect from her dress, with just the right amount of nipple centered on each one. Sliding my view down her body, I was able to get a slight glimpse of her barely-there black thong. That was when I realized that she had prepared for this moment before she even left home and it eased any hesitation I had about moving forward while she was heavily intoxicated.
While I was taking in the breathtaking view, her hands were trying to remove my shirt as quickly as they could. I guess she liked what she saw because once she got my shirt halfway off and saw my upper body, she paused for a moment and looked me up and down once again before leaning in for a wild sloppy kiss. I could tell she was beginning to get warmed up with how strongly she was advancing. Then she began working her lips wildly across the side of my face and down my neck, making her way down to what she really had on her mind. When she paused right in front of it to look back up at me, she let the naughtiest little grin slowly form on her face. Her lip bite that followed sent me through the roof and I could see my manhood beginning to bulge out even more than it already was as it was getting more engorged from all of the excitement. Then came her hands, sliding all over and pressing hard against every bit of it before reaching for the button to my pants and quickly popping it open. She must have noticed the shift in my groin, because she quickly broke eye contact and began to admire my package again.
I could feel the pressure that had been squeezing my manhood releasing as she slid that zipper all the way down. Next thing I knew, I was standing there in my sexy trunks which I had also put on just in case things went this way. I didn’t try to hide and gladly pushed it out for her to see what she has to work with. It felt great to finally be out of those constricting pants so my member and marbles had some relief and room to hang. The only problem was that those trunks were still holding it back. She must’ve read my mind because before everything had settled in place, she was already grabbing for the waistband of my underwear. She quickly pulled them down to reveal the beginning of the base and paused for a second, preparing herself for what she was about to reveal. Then she continued ever so slowly pulling them down to reveal my pride and joy bit by bit. First, she reached the balls and they let out a sigh of relief as they popped out of the trunks for some fresh air. It took a little bit longer before she revealed the rest of my cock, but when she did it just popped right up to introduce itself to her cheek and mouth. When it came up and hit her in the face, she jumped back a bit. I’m not sure if it startled her or if she wasn’t into that kind of thing. That question was soon answered when she looked up at me with another big smile on her face, grabbed a handful of my ass, and worked her other hand to my cock. She tried to grab a hold of it as well but her fingers came up a bit short.
After swinging it side to side to get a good feel for it, she leaned in for the kiss. Her lips and tongue danced all around the head, sending tingles straight through me. The intensity began increasing as she worked around the sides and underneath, making a stop at my heavy sack. Licking up the bottom of my shaft while rolling my balls around just about sent me over the edge. I tossed my head back, trying to focus on not ending this thing too early. She must’ve been able to tell I was getting close, because she stopped for a bit to let me calm down and just looked up at me with that little smile, so proud of what she’s doing to me. Suddenly out of nowhere, I felt something warm and wet envelop the top half of my cock before I even noticed that she had her head mounted on it. This naughty little slut had her lips so tight around me and I could feel her tongue pressing hard up against the bottom. Right before my big head slammed up against an obstruction. The sensations radiating from my dick were unreal and all I could do was let out a deep groan and “FUUUUUCK.”
This must’ve sent her into overdrive, because she reached both hands around me and pulled on my ass to bury myself in her face even harder. The warmth turned to cool as she drew her head slowly back and let the air hit my wet shaft, but it didn’t last long before she plunged her head right down on it again with more force than I thought she could muster. Going back and forth a few times, I could feel the release coming. She looked up at me as if saying she was ready for me to let go. On that cue, I grabbed the back of her head with both hands and began going to town on her pretty little face, pulling her head toward me as I thrust my hips into her face. I could only imagine what it felt like for her with how tight her lips were and how shallow her throat was.
Within minutes, I felt the climax approaching. This time I didn’t hold back or try to fight it. When I let loose, I could only shout “OH FUUUUCK! YES, JUST LIKE THAT! I’M ABOUT TO BLOW! HERE IT COMES,” holding her head in place with my hips pushed forward, keeping my hard cock buried deep in her throat as I unloaded all of the cum from my big heavy balls. It was the most intense cumshot I had ever experienced as it just kept going and going. I wasn’t even finished yet and noticed some white stuff was already leaking out around my dick. After my full release, I just paused for a moment to take in everything that had just happened. When I finally decided to pull back out slowly, a flood of my sticky love juice spilled out from her stretched mouth. I was in total disbelief at how much I had filled her up when she leaned back and used her tongue to push it all out so it ran down her chin and onto her amazing tits pretty waist, and sexy thong. The icing on the cake was when she let a huge smile across her cum-dripping mouth and shook her tits side to side for me, showing the masterpiece we made together. I think I may have found the most perfect woman ever; an angel in the streets and a slut in the sheets. She is definitely a keeper and I can only imagine what else she has in store for me.
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