An opportunity

****First time poster. This is the first erotica I’ve attempted. I am open to suggestion and feedback. I’m always looking to improve. Sorry for any weird formatting. I hope you enjoy.

An opportunity presents itself. A moment alone without the eyes of others to notice the growing need between them.

Kat watched Thomas from across the room-taking all of him in. The length of his long limbs awakened desire within her. The way he moved, his dark hair, his swagger, that fucking 5 o’clock shadow she dreamed of scratching rhythmically between her thighs- God, she wanted him. She wanted to run her fingers along his smooth white skin and search his lean muscles to assuage every last bit of lingering tension from him. She could relieve him of anything, if he’d let her. She wanted to. And she knew he wanted her to.

She noticed that Thomas was looking at her too. A deep bruising blush rushed to Kat’s cheeks. She was so pale- even in the dim lights he was certain to notice the fire building in her now. She tried to adjust her dress. She could feel it riding up, revealing too much leg. When she pulled the hem down, it only pulled her neckline down further, exposing more of her ample cleavage. It was the devil’s dress. Kat decided to leave it alone and stop worrying about Thomas seeing too much. Kat wanted him to see her. She didn’t care anymore if Thomas knew that he was everything she wanted. Because tonight…

Tonight..she planned to take him. She felt entitled to it. She’d been so good for such a long time- but she knew that he knew- she was a very bad girl. He knew he was the only one who made Kat want to risk everything.

Kat didn’t know where everybody went and she didn’t really fucking care. The party had been raging all but an hour ago. Her brain was all a buzz- she was high and feeling loose. Her favorite. The music flooding the empty dance floor filled her head with its fuzzy confusion but it steeled her nerves.

She decided to move toward him. She could sense Thomas wanted her to. They were alone after all….

Her heels clicked on the wooden floor as she made her way from the loneliest corner in the room to his side. Her hips swayed nonchalantly as she made her way to him.

“Where did everybody go? Were we not invited?” Kat asks, delicately placing a hand on Thomas’s chest.

“Right?” Thomas responds turning to look at her. The intensity in his eyes softening as his eyes make contact with Kate’s. Gorgeous. He looked so exposed and she wanted nothing more in that moment than to honor his openness with something equally vulnerable.

“I didn’t want to go anywhere anyway,” Kat smirked.

“Oh, no? What is it that you DO want?” Thomas asks her, taking a step forward to close the distance between them.

Thomas’s arms reach for Kat’s hips and pull them against his body. His hands grab her ass and squeeze. He feels perfect as he presses the whole of him against her. Kat was losing her mind. The tempo of her heartbeat sped within her breast- hammering away like a psychotic metronome. Her arms wrap around him as she leans the weight of her breasts into his chest. Feeling him pressed against her body, Kat shudders with pleasure. The blood within her veins pumps double-time, attempting to strangle and destroy any remaining apprehension.

Kat felt something growing within her. Was it courage? Kat felt something growing in Thomas too. His cock was hard and she could feel it against her stomach as she ran her hands up his back and into the nape of his hair.

Some previously unknown bravery (depravity?) was rhythmically rushing and tickling her pussy back to life with boiling urgency. She didn’t know- but this felt right. It was fate.

“You know that I want you,” Kat admits shamelessly.
She removes a hand from Thomas’s hair. She takes his hand in hers and guides it to her left breast. “But I’m done with all the wanting. Aren’t you?”

Thomas doesn’t speak. He simply grabs the neckline of Kat’s dress, stretches it open wide, and peels it down over her shoulders, over her breasts, down over her hips, and onto the floor. Kat steps out of the dress at her feet and kicks it away. She looks up at him. Her eyes never leave his. Thomas traces his long index finger slowly between the her cleavage.

“Wanna play?” she asks sweetly.

Thomas can see that Kay isn’t wearing any underwear but she is wearing a black garter belt to keep up her thigh high stockings. She giggles at how obvious she was about wanting to please him.

“I was ready for you,” she laughs.

Thomas’s face moves impossibly close to hers. But he doesn’t kiss her. Not yet. He removes Kat’s black lace bra with confidence. His arms wrap around the fullness and softness of her body. Enfolding her. Her skin is cold. The only warmth in this moment, the only warmth that could save her- lives within Thomas’s need.

Kat ‘s nipples were growing hard as her body responded to Thomas’s touch- to his very breathing. He was excited. He wanted this too. Kat could tell. Thomas’s hands snaked their over her breasts. Cupping them forcefully, rolling her pretty pink nipples between his thumb and index finger.

Kat expressed her pleasure in quiet sighs. Thomas’s hands inched way down toward Kay’s ass and as he squeezed her cheeks within his palms, Kat inhaled deeply. Audibly. Encouraging him, convincing him that his touch was working. Her pussy was very wet, so very warm, and waiting for him.

She moves her mouth to his and slowly their lips meet. It’s a moment she has thought about hundreds- if not thousands of times. Her hands are back in his hair as she slowly and softly becomes acquainted with the feeling of his flesh on her mouth.

At first they test each other. They taste one another gently- only to become familiar with each other’s movements and methods. Things begin sweetly enough- but the animals within each of them soon take hold.

Kat bites Thomas’s lower lip between her teeth and draws it into her mouth. Her tongue wet and teasing, his tongue curious and delicious.

Nibbling and pulling Thomas’s full lips into her mouth, Kat cupped his face in her hands. She loved the feeling of his jaw moving in her palms. She savored the feeling of Thomas between her teeth. She opened her eyes as she kissed him. Normally, she stays blind. Eyes wide shut. But she wants to see Thomas while she tastes him. She wants to see the look on his face as they cross the Rubicon together.

Kat pulls away. Breaking the kiss. Grabbing Thomas’s white t-shirt. She helps him pull it off over his head. Kat’s hands spend scarcely a moment exploring Thomas’s bare chest before her hands are frantically undoing the button and zipper on his pants.

“I want to suck your cock,” Kat says plainly. “I want to feel you explode in my mouth. We may not get another moment alone together- but tonight…is for you.”

Kat pulls Thomas’s pants and boxer briefs down to the floor and settles into a comfortable position on her knees. Genuflecting before him. Eyes peering upward into his. She’s going to worship him, alright.

A-fucking-men.

God, she wants him. Her hands glide slowly upward…creeping and exploring the contours of Thomas’s long defined legs. Kat stares up at him hungrily from the position on her knees.. His cock was smooth- alluringly thick and stiff. She wanted him between her lips. Both sets. But tonight, tonight was about swallowing him whole.

Kat licks her teeth and bites her lip as she gazes upward at this beautiful man.

“I knew you were going to be impressive. May I show you how much I appreciate you?” she asks innocently.

It’s scarcely a whisper but Thomas nods enthusiastically and trails of with a, “Yes. Yes. Yes.”

Kat brings her right hand up to her lips and spits into her palm. She carefully grips the base of Thomas’s cock with her hand all while taking the head of his perfectly rigid dick between her lips.

Kat’s right hand slowly moves up and down the shaft of Thomas’s rock hard cock, rotating her wrist in circular motions as her hand travels forward and backward.

Thomas lets out a long and low growl. A pleasurable tightening sensation suddenly pulses at Kat’s very center- right there- in the softest, wettest, pinkest part of her being. His pleasure was most assuredly her pleasure.

She could feel him release his tension . She liked to know she was making him feel good. And as her mouth worked his cock up and down, over and over- she felt Thomas’s need growing firmer between her teeth.

Moving him in and out of her mouth was exquisite. Tasting him. Feeling him in her throat. It made her cunt feel so alive. She was so fucking wet.

Kat’s teeth pressed more firmly against her lips as Thomas’s dick throbbed and grew impossibly hard. Kat pushed her face and throat deeper onto Thomas’s erection. She deep throated his giant cock and when she pulled away to take a breath/ bands of sticky wet saliva kept him connected to her.

Her eyes were watering and she was sure her make-up was smudged but she didn’t care.

Kat took a deep breath and smiled up at him from the floor. “Come on, baby. Are you going to fuck my face or not?”

Leaning forward Kat sucked Thomas’s cock back into her mouth and pressed her teeth so hard behind her lips that her canines broke skin, drawing blood. Kat didn’t care. She continued to slide rhythmically over Thomas’s bulging mass. It felt so good to taste him. With ease, wet and slippery- she moved her lips and tongue over him. Relishing every moan and growl he let escape from his lips.

“Use your teeth,” Thomas demanded.

“Mmmhmm” she hummed. Willing in every way, to do what he asked.

Peeling her lips away from her fangs , Kat grazed Thomas’s cock with her teeth, careful not to hurt him too badly. He let out a deep guttural moan that set Kat on fire. God, she wanted him to feel it. She was so thrilled he was.

His hands found her hair. He gripped her tendrils tightly but gently in both hands and proceeded to move himself in and out of her. Sometimes he pushed his dick deeply into her throat waiting for when she gagged on him so he could pull back and re-enter her with shallower thrusts. She choked and gagged as he fucked her-but she liked it. His cock was twitching and she knew he was close. She pulled away from his exquisite cock for only a moment and looking up into his beautiful green eyes whispers, “Cum in my mouth. Come on, boy, I want to taste you.”

Her mouth was back on him in an instant. Her tongue roamed, focusing on the head of his cock as her hand milked him like a bull.

“Cum for me,” she hummed on his dick.

Her right hand moved between her legs as she felt Thomas’s dick pushing deep into the back of her throat. She moved her hand frantically over over her clit. She was going to explode but wanted to wait until Thomas did too. She felt an itching sensation, something tickling between her legs that NEEDED to be scratched. The tension built- as she swayed her fingers over her wet clit. Her pussy was dripping her cum on the floor. Thomas cock thrust once, twice until his body finally shuddered buckling forward. The sensation between her legs and in her mouth was overwhelming and she came undone. She came hard on her knees, his milky white semen exploding in rhythmic pulsing gushes into her mouth. He tasted sweet and salty.

When she was sure he was emptied. She slowly sucks herself off his dick. Kat wipes the wet sloppy saliva from her mouth with the back of her forearm- smearing her lipstick and laughing giddily.

She gets up from her knees and stands to kiss him one more time. And as they make-out, pressed tightly against each other in a lover’s embrace- Kat whispers between kisses.

“Next time,” kiss.
“It’s,” kiss.
“My turn. “

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/osp5ss/an_opportunity

3 comments

  1. Pretty good read. Few typos but that didn’t stop my from reading. Decent fluidity of word flow. Felt kind of rushed at the end to close up…I had to rely on my imagination a couple times to stay with the story…but overall not bad, I don’t write…I’d like to, but yeah I enjoyed quite a bit of it

  2. Very nice, I’m definitely looking forward to when it’s her turn 😘😏

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