What do you think of this script?

A domme and sub are having foreplay at the dommes place. The domme pours candle wax on the subs back.

Domme: How would you like candles? (pours a bit of it on the subs back)

Sub: Ahhhhhhhh emergency! emergency! (their safeword) (the sub starts crying in pain)

Domme: Oh shit! What have I done? (unties him and holds him her arms ) I’m sorry! I’m sorry! Shhhhhhhhhh, I got you. I got you. Its over. Its over. No more of that. No more candles. Shhhhhh. Don’t worry, I’m here for you. (crying stops after sometime). Let me get you a cream. (The domme gets the cream and applies it on the wound) (the writhes in pain) Shhhhhh, just a second. It’s almost done. There, it’s done.

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/nfspn2/what_do_you_think_of_this_script